LegaxEsom In reply to ??? [2008-08-31 02:25:40 +0000 UTC]

I'd actually be a little thankful for it. And you're probably thinking of the same place I am.

(stanza 3, line 2, needs to be shortened 2 syllables, i think?)

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edabass In reply to LegaxEsom [2008-09-01 16:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Third stanza, second line. the choice of words is good, but the rhyme scheme isn't balanced the same way the other stanzas are. NOT a huge issue, but a bit jarring, esp. in one reads it aloud.

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LegaxEsom In reply to edabass [2008-09-01 23:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Let it be forever known that I called that shiz. I am a mind reader!

Yeah, I realized the inconsistency, but all the changes I tried making to it just didn't sit well with me. So it stuck. Not the most professional of decisions, but eh.

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edabass In reply to meltflesh [2008-07-20 12:05:19 +0000 UTC]

I love the energy in your drawings. Interested in seeing where you go with your art.

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meltflesh In reply to edabass [2008-07-20 16:34:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! i have energy ahah that is so cool

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luethy In reply to ??? [2008-04-20 18:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the favs !

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edabass In reply to Kishin007 [2007-12-24 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Yah, well...ask anyone who knows me in CoV...

I CAN'T KEEP MAH MOUT SHET!

Happy Holidays, all!

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bentleysthebest In reply to ??? [2007-11-29 19:56:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the fav

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sarahfinnigan In reply to ??? [2007-11-05 20:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the favorite!

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luethy In reply to ??? [2007-09-30 20:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the Fav

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zerry In reply to ??? [2007-09-28 17:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Love your photography!

Not sure if you've heard of , but feel free to poke them into taking a look at your storywork sometime

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edabass In reply to zerry [2007-09-29 12:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And no I hadn't, and yes, I might.

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Kishin007 In reply to ??? [2007-09-28 15:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment!

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edabass In reply to Kishin007 [2007-09-29 13:55:30 +0000 UTC]

You ever coming back to the game? Would be interesting to meet some of the characters that inspired the drawings...or were inspired by them...or whatever...

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luethy In reply to ??? [2007-09-28 14:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the favs !

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mesophyll In reply to ??? [2007-09-25 05:34:32 +0000 UTC]

thankee so much for the comments and favourites

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luna-nera In reply to ??? [2007-09-24 21:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank You for the



--
"I died So many years ago"

~Stock Photographer

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bentleysthebest In reply to ??? [2007-09-23 15:15:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the favs and watch!

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edabass In reply to bentleysthebest [2007-09-23 15:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Looks to me like you've got a good feel for it, and are getting better. Looking forward to seeing what you come up w/next.

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bentleysthebest In reply to edabass [2007-09-23 16:21:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks im waiting fo rthe fall colors to tun a little more, so i can drive around my town and take pics

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bentleysthebest In reply to ??? [2007-09-23 13:54:47 +0000 UTC]

hey...sorry for that whole overload of favs..... i do that alot when i find good art but you have very very good pictures

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edabass In reply to bentleysthebest [2007-09-23 14:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Still relearning, after a long time away- great thing about digital is you can mess up as often as you want without it costing you anything!

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edabass In reply to edabass [2007-09-23 14:44:07 +0000 UTC]

And I'd rather have a flood of faves than put stuff up and never know if anyone likes it- really, who wouldn't?

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bentleysthebest In reply to edabass [2007-09-23 15:14:46 +0000 UTC]

good ^^

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bentleysthebest In reply to ??? [2007-09-23 13:42:06 +0000 UTC]

you have some nice pictures!!!!

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Mjag In reply to ??? [2007-09-05 22:08:31 +0000 UTC]

What is the meaning of life?

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niekitty In reply to Mjag [2007-09-23 15:06:24 +0000 UTC]

42

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edabass In reply to niekitty [2007-09-23 18:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Times a night?

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niekitty In reply to edabass [2007-09-23 22:50:11 +0000 UTC]

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edabass In reply to Mjag [2007-09-06 01:23:18 +0000 UTC]

It varies from person to person- and life to life.

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Kishin007 In reply to ??? [2007-07-08 15:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! Thank you for your comments and favorites!

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IsThisChaos In reply to ??? [2007-03-29 14:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! Thanks for the visit!

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sarahfinnigan In reply to ??? [2007-03-25 02:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the favorites and watch!

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seraphimsphoto In reply to ??? [2007-03-24 22:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the on V in Roses !!!

You rock!

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