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"is writing like always"
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# Comments
Comments: 93
Any time (actually, only once a year, but you get the point)!
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You're welcome, that's a great ro character.
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Hey, you're a wannabe novelist too and you live in Canada too and you like Pokemon too? Sounds like we'd get along. xD Oh, and you're a guy too. That helps, although I don't really care for people's gender, unless it gets... complicated.
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It sure sounds like we could, although I'm not sure if I really get why being a guy should matter ^^'. Anyway(no big deal), if there's something you want to discuss, feel free.
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Hmmm.... the only things I would see that would make us not get along is that you seem to like Ash, or at least Ashachu... and we are kind of competing in a contest. Competition can make people evil! Anyways, when I feel less overwhelmed because of school when I'm not really overwhelmed, I might bother to send you a note to begin a conversation :3
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You're welcome. I really liked those two and their carefree attitude, nice poster. x)
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Thank you so much for the favorite on Pikachu and Scenery! I'm glad you like it and I really appreciate your support!
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Well, that's an impressive drawing. It looks like it took a lot of work and I must say I really like the feeling it gives, there's something... maybe majestic (?) about the way things are placed.
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Thank you! Yes, it took a lot of patience to work on. I was going through a rough period in my life at the time so it was a good thing to do while I was thinking and working through my emotions. I'm glad you find it somewhat majestic, I was trying to put some feeling into it.
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Like a few others x)(yeah, I'm just arrogant). Don't worry, I'll work on it and post as soon as I can.
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Hey! I like your story so far. Always good to have more Ashachu in the mix, haha ♥
I noticed that you use « and » instead of quotation marks, and that you're from Quebec... is French your first language?
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Yes, it is. Is it that easy to notice? Gosh, I hope it does not look too bad in the text.
Could you please show me an example of where I should replace an «and» by quotation marks?
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No, no! I was only asking because it's *not* obvious, and I wanted to make sure. Your English is really good! 
Anyway, I'll use an example from your fic:
«Great! »
Ash jumped out of bed.
«When are we goiOUCH. »
Apparently, his injured body wasn't ready at all. So, he crashed to the floor and the pain got bigger than ever.
«Guess I really need that «getting used to the body» training. »
«Ash. Are you okay? »
«Huh, I think so, Pikachu. »
«Oh, good, I won't feel bad for doing this then. »
With quotation marks, it becomes:
"Great," Ash jumped out of bed, "when are we goiOUCH!"
Apparently, his injured body wasn't ready at all. So, he crashed to the floor and the pain got bigger than ever. "Guess I really need that 'getting used to the body' training."
"Ash. Are you okay?"
"Huh, I think so, Pikachu."
"Oh, good. I won't feel bad for doing this, then." He began to laugh at his master.
I'm not sure what the rules are for your « and » marks, but in English, you can have the speech and action on the same line. Sometimes you can interrupt a quote with action, like I did with the first line. :3
J'ai étudiée un peu de français, mais maintenant je ne létudiant plus. XD; J'adore les langues mais c'est trop difficile x___x;
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Hum... I guess I could try this way of writing the speeches, but I like the way I use now... It feels a bit more natural to me and I usually reads books written that way.
Which would be better?
By the way, your French is quite good too. Just change «étudiée» with «étudié» (almost never put the plural and gender mark after the auxiliary to have) and «létudiant» with «l'étudie» («étudiant» is the noun).
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Ça me t'égal. I can understand your story no problem, so I say you should keep doing what's comfortable. :3
Merci, je suis heureux que tu peut me comprends
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Hello, fellow Ashachu fan 
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Well, I'll do my best to make it interesting. I hope you'll like where it's going.
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Oh, you might find this interesting.
is making an ashchu comic. It actually hasn't gotten to the point where... well, you know, but I have a hunch it's coming very soon.
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Oh, I already read it. It seems fairly interesting,
but I think it'll take more time than you believe for the «twist» to happen.
Personal hunch.
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I have a deal for you: I will watch you, If you do not say 'thanks for the watch!' on my page, or watch me for the simple reason of me watching you. Basically, I want to watch you, and you to act like I didn't.
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That's a pretty good deal. I'm not that much of a «I watch you if you watch me» guy anyway.
Go ahead and watch all you want, I'll try not to bother you. Is that fine?
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