SkeletonLete In reply to ??? [2012-07-27 02:06:34 +0000 UTC]

ok ^w^ so what would u like to do a comic about writer !!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to SkeletonLete [2012-07-27 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]

well how about we do a comic on a story called "mario's death" it hasn't been written yet but i'll get to it tonight and i will send you 5 or 6 pages when it's done!. will that work for you?

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SkeletonLete In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-07-27 02:19:26 +0000 UTC]

yup :3!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to SkeletonLete [2012-07-27 02:24:44 +0000 UTC]

awesome!.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to ??? [2012-07-27 00:59:53 +0000 UTC]

yes!.

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amaranthine-eternity In reply to ??? [2012-07-26 05:53:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the watch!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to amaranthine-eternity [2012-07-26 05:58:47 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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marielyn-chan In reply to ??? [2012-07-26 02:33:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly for the fav

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djpimpslap22 In reply to marielyn-chan [2012-07-26 02:34:59 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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tyshwortzz In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 07:25:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks for faving and the watch

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djpimpslap22 In reply to tyshwortzz [2012-07-25 07:26:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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Finnibuns-Mcgee In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 07:05:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch. :3

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Finnibuns-Mcgee [2012-07-25 07:05:41 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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Dracyon In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 07:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks there for the watch! And for all the 's, too.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Dracyon [2012-07-25 07:04:47 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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theguy2230 In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 07:00:31 +0000 UTC]

thx for the fave, and watch!!!
deviantART muro drawing

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djpimpslap22 In reply to theguy2230 [2012-07-25 07:02:28 +0000 UTC]

your welcome! and thanks for watching!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to feat-outsider [2012-07-25 06:39:24 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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Juiceboxx17 In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 04:16:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the fave

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Juiceboxx17 [2012-07-25 05:03:32 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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rainyfurz In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 00:39:45 +0000 UTC]

You seem to like to ask a lot of people for watches. :U

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djpimpslap22 In reply to rainyfurz [2012-07-25 00:41:31 +0000 UTC]

well i wanna be knowed on deviantart.

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we-are-homestucked In reply to ??? [2012-07-25 00:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the watch and favorite! ~Hikaru

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djpimpslap22 In reply to we-are-homestucked [2012-07-25 00:09:34 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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LunaBell In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 23:26:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the watch

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djpimpslap22 In reply to LunaBell [2012-07-24 23:35:49 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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NaruMikuLink99 In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the and the watch

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djpimpslap22 In reply to NaruMikuLink99 [2012-07-24 23:14:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!. and your welcome!.

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shotgunAnnie In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 23:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the watch and favorite!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to shotgunAnnie [2012-07-24 23:11:36 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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MyBabyAce5 In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 18:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fave!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to MyBabyAce5 [2012-07-24 22:46:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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yagyag In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 07:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to yagyag [2012-07-24 08:11:24 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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minamorgan In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 07:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the favorites and comments.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to minamorgan [2012-07-24 07:34:38 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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amaranthine-eternity In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 07:07:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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Zero760 In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 06:44:04 +0000 UTC]

And thanks for the fav~

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Zero760 [2012-07-24 06:44:30 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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Jenneeh In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 06:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the lovely comment! I'll watch you, I hope it's not too much to ask to follow my art as well

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Jenneeh [2012-07-24 06:37:40 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!. and i will follow you two!.

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Chynite In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 06:30:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav!!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Chynite [2012-07-24 06:31:36 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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WildChild109 In reply to ??? [2012-07-24 06:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to WildChild109 [2012-07-24 06:22:35 +0000 UTC]

your welcome! again!

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KickStartDesigns In reply to ??? [2012-07-06 13:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for Favoriting Sakura...

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djpimpslap22 In reply to KickStartDesigns [2012-07-06 15:07:13 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!.

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Tsukura-Chronicles In reply to ??? [2012-07-05 21:49:40 +0000 UTC]

It was a quick read. I do have idea's that could help you. First off, the way it's written is much like a screenplay. One of my favorite's is A Doll's House by Henrik Ibsen. I suggest you try reading it and see how he writes his play. [link]

If you have adobe and can open it up, you can see that he leaves the speaking part as normal and when he is talking about action, he uses parenthesis () and Italics. I think if you use that, it'll help your work. When I see quotes for action, it confuses me. But other than that and some grammar and spelling, you're doing well. If you have a love for writing, keep doing it. You'll just end up getting better with time. I'm speaking this from personal experience. Another good idea is to go back over what you've written and re-read/edit it once you're completely done. That way you can work towards making it better. I've gone through my book Tsukura Chronicles about 3 times so far and I'm always finding things that I missed the previous times around. I hope this helps you out. Keep up with the writing and don't let anyone ever get you down. You can only get better by working at your craft.

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