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LinTimeHero
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"Fear the truffles! Fear 'em"
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# Comments
Comments: 574
Good, My laptop is currently being fixed so I won't be on unless I have access to a computer
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Hello, you have some nice yaoi. [link] Come talk to me and our group members at YaoiState. ;-; Share your art with other yaoi lovers at our group page aswell. It may earn you more appreciation.
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Thank You for the fav! Did you injoy my story?
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I did, its really good and really cute with baby Sora!!
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Ya! Thank you! Cute Sora but also poor Sora.
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I know, losing his mom and hit, poor kid probably has brain damage
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Yes... But no on bran damage but even though he dose not rember in the next ch, in some way it left a mark on him. You cant see it but the way he acts in the 2ed ch you now it has been done.
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I see, cant wait to read the rest
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read it just now...*is fast reader* He is all grown up! XD
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I re wrote ch 2. Because i wasent happy with it the first time. Soo i was wondering if i can send it to you and see which one you like best?
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Ok thx! Its prity much the same but with more detal. Tell me which one is best. 
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"Sora time to wake up," Sora looks up at Gylife with his tired eyes.
βTo tired.β He said as he rolled back over facing the wall.
"Oh but I thought somebody special was going to visit your school today." She said as she lend against the door frame.
Sora jump out of bed throwing the blankets into the air as he jump out of bed. Remembering that someone was coming to his school. Nobody now how he is not even the teachers. He was excited that something new was going to happen at school instead of it being normal he grabbed his school uniform and running to the bath room to take a shower. Gylife just stood there with a worried exasperation on her face. Baren walks over and asks "whatβs wrong?"
"I have a bad feeling about this person that is coming too their school." She said as she turned around to face Baren.
"Hhmm now that I think about it me too. But donβt worry, Luke will be there."
(Yes Luke was ordered to keep an eye on Sora during the time Sora was there he has been to every school that Sora has and all that.)
Gylife bared her face into Baren chest and stared crying. "I donβt believe it has been almost 16 years." Baren nodded his head in agreement and hugged her back. Even though they were not supposed to get to attach to Sora to much. But they got very fond of the boy he was a strait βAβ student. He got into no fights at school; he was kind to everyone around him. Even in the worst of times.
"Donβt worry Gylife maybe the king wont him so soon and we have a couple of weeks before we had over to the kingβs castle for Soras party."
(On Soras 16 Bday they will be going there.)
Gylife look up at him still not convinced and she still has tears rolling down her cheeks. "But I am worried about Soras life, heβs still in danger!" "He will always be until that mad man is coat." She said stared getting ferrous and she stepped back and grabbed Barens shirt with both of her hands.
"I know Gylife me too but now go make breakfast before Sora hears us."
"I know," she said as she let go of his shirt and dried her face. She turned around and headed down stars to make breakfast.
Baren just stood there looking at the ground with sadness in his eyes and then started walking done the hall to the kitchen.
(In the bathroom.)
Sora put on his school uniform which was a white blouse. With blue platen pants with a blue tie that just hung loosely around his neck. Then he put on his crown necklace on and put it underneath his blouse and made shear no one would see it because jewelry are not allowed at school. He wore it because it was his mothers. Even though he did not know her every time he puts it on he fills like she is right next to him.
(Yes Gylife and Baren told him that they were not his real
parents and it is pretty obvious because Gylife has long red hair and green eyes. Baren was brown hair and gray eyes and he was strait hair not spiky hair like he does.)
Sora brunched his hair and then went back to his room he still had 30 minutes before he needed to walk to school. So he got some books out of his backpack and stared studying for a big test that they were going to have in a month.
A few minutes later Gylife called him done for breakfast. So he got his stuff and he put it back in his backpack and put on his black dress shoes and grabbed his backpack and walk done stars.
He sat down across the table from Gylife and Baren. He looks at his plate and he picks up his fork and ate his waffles. After he was done he said,βThank you for the waffles and then he got up and put it in the sink. Then went back up stars to brush his teeth. Then he got up and put it in the sink. Then went back up stars to brush his teeth.
As he left he said good bye, and then left.
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What do you think?
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it does seem better, especially with the details added, but the other one is also good. I'm torn!! DX
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But do you a fav on which one? 1 or 2? I am sorry that your torn. DX
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Well, if you want my writer's view. It'd be the the revised one (2).
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No problem. Now I have a question for you, but I'll be sending it in a note. Cause this is something I want privacy for
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think you and Kana might be on tonight? it'd be the first time all of us were on in a while.
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I'm coming on the website soon, just need to check a few things
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Oh, this is unrelated, but my brother also has Assassins Creed II, I thought about it when I read your journal post. It seems pretty sweet.
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its really awesome!!
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Adams alive, he's on right now,
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Hey, how are you? Kana's on the ning, Ii'll probably be on in an hour and a half or so, how's everything been?
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Good...I guess, its complicated
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I'm glad you like the finished product of the preview =]
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Hehe, thankies ^^ It too FOREVER(in my opinion. I usually take an hour tops, not hours upon hours in three days) =___=;;
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good, how's Kana doing on her reply, how was your christmas?
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Still working on that and Mine was okay and great
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Thanks for adding the new one =]
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