Shannenthefox In reply to ??? [2012-05-23 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]

tnx for the fav again

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Shannenthefox [2012-05-23 23:04:26 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Shannenthefox In reply to ??? [2012-05-23 22:47:18 +0000 UTC]

tnx for the fav

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NarcyTenta In reply to ??? [2012-05-23 20:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Well. I have read the first part. It’s not my cup of tea, but the story is nice anyway. I think you can add more interesting details about main and minor characters and the whole situation you are writing about. It might help to keep a reader’s attention.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to NarcyTenta [2012-05-23 21:07:21 +0000 UTC]

thank's for the advice!

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NarcyTenta In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-23 22:26:33 +0000 UTC]

It’s no big deal. I’m glad to help. You don't have to follow my advice if you don’t want)). It’s just an opinion.

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10eke-stock In reply to ??? [2012-05-23 09:46:19 +0000 UTC]

I may read it, but my native language is dutch and although I can manage in english I do have trouble finding the right phrases. So I am afraid I cannot give you proper feed back, not in grammar, or style, or misspelling...

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djpimpslap22 In reply to 10eke-stock [2012-05-23 09:48:39 +0000 UTC]

well thats ok!

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Squadhillie In reply to ??? [2012-05-21 23:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, can you explain to me what your Alliance?What Alliance? thing is about ... I read the first part, and im still confused.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-21 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]

well i'm kinda of trying to build up to it by give the story depth so i can't give away what's going to happen next...

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-22 00:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, becuase if i were to make a comic out of it, i would like to know what the story is about, or where its headed. Well, im tempted to make a short comic about it, its up to you for example, if you want me to do a specific scene from your story or ... I dont know

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-22 02:22:12 +0000 UTC]

you know what? never mind on the idea

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ThreshTheSky In reply to ??? [2012-05-21 04:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much for the favorite.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to ThreshTheSky [2012-05-21 04:51:48 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Crimsonpelt In reply to ??? [2012-05-21 03:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fave

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Crimsonpelt [2012-05-21 03:14:41 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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KurtBelcher1 In reply to ??? [2012-05-20 02:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the Favorite!


KAB

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djpimpslap22 In reply to KurtBelcher1 [2012-05-20 02:07:27 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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ThreshTheSky In reply to ??? [2012-05-19 18:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much for the favorite.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to ThreshTheSky [2012-05-19 18:41:29 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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EclipxPhotography In reply to ??? [2012-05-19 12:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav and visiting

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djpimpslap22 In reply to EclipxPhotography [2012-05-19 14:30:09 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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EclipxPhotography In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

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Squadhillie In reply to ??? [2012-05-19 02:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry, im new here. Can you fill me in on what that is?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 02:26:38 +0000 UTC]

you know teaming up with someone to make something?

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Like what?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 02:30:31 +0000 UTC]

how's about a cartoon? or a comic?

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 02:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Sure, how will we work this out?
... Becuase I have no idea XD
Im telling you, i joined like 2 months ago, but I dont know much to socialize around here.

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 02:40:45 +0000 UTC]

what if we send thing's over the internet?

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 02:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Sure, that will be fine. What type of drawings/comic did you have in mind?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 02:48:01 +0000 UTC]

what about a comic based on my stories?

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Sure, whats your story ?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 03:02:57 +0000 UTC]

"alliance! what alliance!?"

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Squadhillie In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-19 03:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Ill look into it tommarrow, and let you know what I think? Sounds okay with you?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Squadhillie [2012-05-19 03:06:11 +0000 UTC]

sure!

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ChasesKitty In reply to ??? [2012-05-19 02:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to ChasesKitty [2012-05-19 02:26:48 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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FG-Arcadia In reply to ??? [2012-05-18 20:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav on Esprit Vengeur!

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djpimpslap22 In reply to FG-Arcadia [2012-05-18 21:15:26 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Shannenthefox In reply to ??? [2012-05-18 08:03:32 +0000 UTC]

tnx for the watch

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Shannenthefox [2012-05-18 12:45:56 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Korra56 In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 22:08:41 +0000 UTC]

did you like pt 4?

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Korra56 [2012-05-17 22:38:36 +0000 UTC]

yes!. it was awesome!,

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Korra56 In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-17 22:40:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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djpimpslap22 In reply to Korra56 [2012-05-17 22:41:09 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Korra56 In reply to djpimpslap22 [2012-05-17 22:43:16 +0000 UTC]

-smile-

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tyshwortzz In reply to ??? [2012-05-13 18:57:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks for faving

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djpimpslap22 In reply to tyshwortzz [2012-05-13 20:34:02 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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xlntwtch In reply to ??? [2012-05-13 13:16:25 +0000 UTC]

...

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djpimpslap22 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-05-13 13:21:36 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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