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Thank you for the favourite on
The Singing LadyHe bought himself a lighthouse
To write in isolation
But it wasn't very long before
It proved a poor decision
At night an eerie singing
And
No explanation could he see
For the almost human voice
Coming from
The sea
Every night she sang to him
So seductively
Luring him
Toward certain death
In
The chilly sea
At first he could resist her
But over days
She drove him crazy
So he got into his little boat
To find
The singing lady
And in the waning moonlight
Something he did see
But it was but a pretty ghost
From mythology
The spirit of a Siren
A Mermaid long deceased
Was the apparition
Giving him no peace
He turned his boat around then
But she sang more mournfully
So he paused and joined her
In duet
And she seemed
Happy
We know this from his writing
That was found inside
His home
But we don't know where he went
I suspect
Beneath the foam!
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CarthagePlate Good day! I've talked to ibenz about making a story for Ninja and the Dark Cult 2 (he said salmon-of-mercy and him wouldn't mind), and since Salmon-of-Mercy hasn't responded, I guess I'll have to take a risk on that one.
That said, I want to know if I can be allowed adopt the name of Elise for our cyborg ninja protagonist in my story too, assuming you don't mind. Just Elise, no Adrian Romero.
What do you think?
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Well, ibenz009 created the original character, so if they are okay with you writing a story for the cyborn ninja I will not object to it. That said, I advise you keep an eye out for if Salmon-of-Mercy responds.
As for adopting the name "Elise", I do not mind that either. Even though I created that version of the original character (that Salmon-of-Mercy first developed with ibenz), other people can make their own ideas using the base material. However, I am interested why you are asking to take the name of my version. Could you create your own version, with different events leading up to that point? Or am I missing something here?
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I guess it's because it stuck out the most as the "codified" version of the name - no one else really stepped up to the plate, so you enjoy a first-mover advantage. I couldn't find any other name that would match the meaning too, unlike the victimized couple, so why not?
That said, because you and artificialArtificer are the only ones to really name this character, I have decided to call her Elise Violette, to signal the significant contributions the two of you have made to the ninja girl.
Once I'm done the first part, where do you want me to send a link to the story?
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Huh, I thought more people had tried to write about this character. Well, you can send the first part through a private Note on this website. If that doesn't work, let me know. Good luck and have fun!
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