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"Obtuse oubli-letters"
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Watching: 11; Pageviews: 3376; Comments Made: 380; Friends: 11
# Comments
Comments: 64
To be blunt, I do not like your poetry. It feels distant and at times forced. It does not leave me moved.
But I realize that most of it is brilliant, and accept this fact.
And so I am going to watch you, in hopes that I may learn something.
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wow dexy's midnight runners...you don't see them everyday...or perhaps you do. cheers.
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i'm note entirely certain, but it's extremely probable that I realised and then forgot that I realised.
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GOT YOUR NUMBER TOO
~atypicalusername
Obtuse oubli-letters
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is a deviant since Jan 28, 2004, 11:34 AM
has 782 pageviews
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I like your avatar I just think it's funny with the whole obvious fact thing
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I like your avatar I just think it's funny with the whole obvious fact thing
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Call me tomorrow. Or I'll call you. Or something.
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trinket? in a way.
i'd like to think not,
but that's just ego talking.
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Noman? just may be, in a way.
in either case, hello again.
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thankyou for the comment...and full what? 
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fuck. wrong window.
a thousand apologies.
ps: i love your work
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Danke for the comment, sorry it's taken so long to reply, I've been an angsty fuck lately.
As usual I am useless at making any tolerable comments on poetry, my favourite to read was A Nail Phile, although I am typically incapable of explaining why - it's just bizarre in the way it reads.
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lol, thankyou for the comment. and im doing alright, i miss talking to you! i wish that i could get online when you are on 
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It is sick of you too, and
that's the point, really.
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i just felt the need to let you know how important you are for me. seriously, i'm glad you're around.
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I was going to work on it, but it was overly clichΓ©d and all the people who knew stuff about poetry would go to see that instead of something that may have been slightly better (by me I mean). So I might just work on it in secret!
Cradle of filth β I guess yes, but Iβm in a non-heavy metal stage currently. I love reading their lyrics, itβs beautiful stuff (when itβs not all morbid and DIE DIE DIE).
Iβll correct for you β faeces
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RΓΌbe geht PossenreiΓer voran!!
Benedictions!
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im gonna write something just for you, with lots of punctuation, and its gonna be about something totally random that ive never written before...and it better make you happy! grr!
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YOU HAVE BEEN KISSED! Spread the DA love around! Pick any of your friends who you think don't get much love and, KISS THEM! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
*dingding* RULES:
1- You can kiss() the person who kissed you!
2- You can kiss() the same person as many times as you see fit!
3- You -MUST- spread the love people! At least 1 kiss()!
4- You should kiss() in public! Paste it on their user page so they feel loved!
5- Random kisses are perfectly okay!
6- Please, don't worry about same gender kissing,it's a love kiss!
7- You should most definitly get started kissing right away!
Remember, this is about showing love to your fellow DA peeps!
Everybody should get a kiss!
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Re: [link]
Yes, very intentional.
Poetic license, I know
you don't want that here.
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thankyou for the comment....i shall definatly keep all of your suggestions and such in mind...i know i should try harder and rewrite stuff so its not so cliche at certain points...but im lazy...
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lol! i've never had anyone apologize for being late in watching me. believe me dear, you're not late for anything, haha. and thank you.
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Guess what...... YOU HAVE BEEN HUGGED! Spread the love around! Pick any of your friends who you think don't get much love and, HUG THEM! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You can hug the same person as many times as you see fit!
3- You -MUST- spread the love people! At least 1 hug!
4- You should hug in public! Paste it on their user page so they feel loved!
5- Random hugs are perfectly okay!
6- Please, don't worry about same gender hugging, it's a love hug!
7- You should most definitly get started hugging right away!
Remember, this is about showing love to your fellow peeps! Everybody should get a hug
*this da love was started by ~ lady-alessandra and ~ Godscrossingsandevil
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Brought here by your not-so-typical username, and enticed to stay by your poetry.
I read all of them, and they are all wonderful.
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~atypicalusername
Obtuse oubli-letters
is a Pseudo-Intellectual
is Male
is a deviant since Jan 29, 2004, 3:34 AM
has 111 pageviews
is located in United Kingdom
last visited 14h 30m 46s ago
hi.
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ohshit, I'm not watching you.
...why didn't you tell me?
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hee take your time, i'm not going anywhere 
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