ObsoleteGoat In reply to LittleMissPriscellia [2016-02-06 10:51:06 +0000 UTC]

You're page looks pretty? i don't rearly review pages, i presume you meant to link something else?

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LittleMissPriscellia In reply to ObsoleteGoat [2016-02-06 12:07:18 +0000 UTC]

oh, wait sorry!
The Book | Races In Versage |Bidarah (Angel)Surreal Adventures has many different types of races.
There are vampires, werewolves, angels, demons, elves, harpies, sirens, ghosts, poltergeists, ghouls, fairies, mermaids and many more. The race that will be discussed today will be angels.
Angels in Versage (a.k.a where the story takes place) appear to be monstrous creatures instead of innocent divine beings. In fact, they are very dangerous when encountered, some appear to be violent while some disguise and pretend to act normal.
In fact, they are more like bloodthirsty and man-eating angels, so they are rather called 'bidarahs' which is a fictional race I made from my language. '
Bi' is 'bidadari' which means 'angel' or 'beauty'. 'Darah' means 'blood'
Blidarahs are sometimes called as blood-angels, cannibal angels, bloodthirsty angels or bloodthirsty whores (Demetri's reference lol)
Here are some facts you should know about these bidarahs:
Ӂ They are the most feared creatures alive because not only that they e
the story is about Demetri, illustrator and writer of a story called 'Surreal Adventures' and draw/write them in a book (also known as 'The Book'). Surreal Adventures was about a city named Versage that was attacked by 'bidarahs' and Genevieve is the main protagonist to save Versage. One day, Demetri's creations became real and she was kidnapped by her own character Genevieve to help her save Versage, to end the story of Surreal Adventures.

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ObsoleteGoat In reply to LittleMissPriscellia [2016-02-11 09:48:13 +0000 UTC]

i'll give this story a review when i have some time ^w^// would you prefer a full formal review or just a short one?

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LittleMissPriscellia In reply to ObsoleteGoat [2016-02-11 11:43:15 +0000 UTC]

full formal review

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