tk-nvme [2004-10-04 10:10:20 +0000 UTC]

the first was better for original content. this is better for imagery.

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epibole [2002-10-15 04:11:44 +0000 UTC]

I love haikus. Such an ideal structure for wisdom and obscurity The idea of drifting makes me think of something only semi-conscious; like you're stumbling about in a drunken stupour (only much more eloquent). That or a boat. I see a boat in this as well. Good show all around.

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spinning-plates [2002-10-14 22:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Perfect. It makes me envision driving alone on a desert highway at night while the world fades around me, and it goes perfectly with the music I am listening to right now. (Godspeed You! Black Emperor)

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salival [2002-10-14 11:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Short & good !
nothin' to complain about!

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ve [2002-10-14 11:24:01 +0000 UTC]

altho it reminds me off myself which makes me hate it in a way and love it in another..


*goes away into the darkness again*

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