Alexzandra [2004-02-26 11:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Ooh...strong three lines. Althought it keeps my biting to know more..

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mclaranium [2002-10-29 07:09:45 +0000 UTC]

I don't know poetry...

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calstylee [2002-10-24 22:50:18 +0000 UTC]

aw sad
hope ur futures warmer (lol?)
well u know what i meen.

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0o-elly-o0 [2002-10-19 06:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Really good. I'm not a fan of short poetry, i like long ones that paint an intricate picture.. but this is awesome. IT does as much as a long one can do in 3 sentences.
Awesome!

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reddust [2002-10-15 10:30:16 +0000 UTC]

i like things to be nice and simple just like this. short but very sweet.

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cerise [2002-10-13 03:31:13 +0000 UTC]

wow 404 that is so cool... its like the epilouge in some vampire book... ^_^ I vampire books so its cool with me ^_^ Kepp it up, yis.


Cerise

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spinning-plates [2002-10-12 23:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Haiku is great. It is so short and simple, but as the title suggests, it can hit you like BAM.

This one did. Great work!

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uninvited-poet [2002-10-12 21:55:01 +0000 UTC]

wow this is simple, i'll be damned..... I LIKE IT!

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poetrymachine [2002-10-12 21:50:35 +0000 UTC]

interesting... very simple... I'm trying to kinda get it.

I guess its very vague in order to be open to lotsa interpretation...

not sure what to think... nice imagery though...

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