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Hello chipzahoy23, i have put here the suggestion and comment that you asked me make,..
as for my suggestion i think is better if you darken your artwork 2 times to make it more sharp and easy to look at. another is i hink its more convincing if you put blood if the monster is hit, it will make more convicing,.. the shoulders looks very small like i dont see a biceps,.. sorry if i draw on top of your drawing but i hope this helps,..

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Hello chipzahoy23, i have put here the suggestion and comment that you asked me make,..
as for my suggestion i think is better if you darken your artwork 2 times to make it more sharp and easy to look at. another is i hink its more convincing if you put blood if the monster is hit, it will make more convicing,.. the shoulders looks very small like i dont see a biceps,.. sorry if i draw on top of your drawing but i hope this helps,..