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Published: 2008-04-14 04:23:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description
fire rainsonto the earth
catching hold of life
like napalm
the sun smolders
through shadows
and teases me
with reminders
denied of warmth
the flames pour
down
enveloping me
with the sharp edge
of uselessness
buried beneath the yellowed grass
I stare into the frigid ice sky
maybe I would stay out here
getting pushed down upon
by the changing tides
waiting for
redgoldyelloworangepumpkingrey
to disappear
and night to set in
Comments: 4
mothfly [2008-04-15 16:41:50 +0000 UTC]
it's full of melancholy but beautiful - I like especially the last part with all the colours and with the last line
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