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steeber [2012-01-09 17:04:03 +0000 UTC]
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Ordinarily, I leave your great work alone. But here, something to consider:
You have marvelous textures and shadows. And you have a bit of virtual "sky" in the wall space above the top horizontal line. But the bottom of the image is angled slightly -- at odds with the structure of the arrangement. In fact, even the upper line slopes slightly to the left. I would consider putting more weight onto the grassy section of the image. The composition lacks roots.
The image would be stronger if at least one line (above or below) were literally horizontal.
The tree shadow is wonderful, and the odd wall texture is effective, but the tonal range of the picture is too narrow -- too grey. It's as if the image were underexposed.
Otherwise, this work evokes references to great photographs of the 20th Century masters. It shows great taste.
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crh [2012-01-10 20:54:57 +0000 UTC]
beatiful shot. as for criticism, I would go along with critic of *steeber, exactly what popped up in my mind, when seein the shot.
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Earth-Hart [2012-01-09 17:27:43 +0000 UTC]
I love playing with shadows Nice one, m'deer :clap
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