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Published: 2012-08-05 01:54:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 54124; Favourites: 5150; Downloads: 0
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Thank you very much for sticking by me while I've been gone. Yes I know, lots of mistakes, haven't colored in half a year and drawn in months. This is kind of a rough painting, pretty quick painting.I've had this idea in my head for about a year or so but have never been able to bring byself to paint for some reason until now.
Please do not use my art without my permission!
Program: OpenCanvas
edit: fixed and changed pose
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Comments: 213
This is a really cool concept! I love the idea. You did a very nice job with this! Great work!
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I love this art because of it`s concept OwO
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I'm sorry you said lots of mistakes?? i'm sorry dear but this is just purely awesome..i can't find my words so describe it
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Lots of mistakes?!?!?!!! You speak madness!!!! This is a flawless work of art! 
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Wow, I really love this picture 
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its true there's a few visible mistakes, but even so this shows a huge improvement in your art- you're getting more and more comfortable with colours, I can't wait to see more
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this is so beautiful!! 
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wow this is really awesome! you're such an amazing artist c:
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every draw in a draw which gets into a real world and a anime person with a stoned face ends up on the frontpage. congratulations.
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I'm willingly to stick with you forever, your art just stays amazing and is a goal for me
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I love the detail and the movement, the coloring is amazing and I'm glad you got your art creativity back ^^
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Very nice~ I always like how you paint. ^^
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This is amazing. Even after all this time, your ideas in art are still breath-taking
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This is really amazing. I love the idea. * v *
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It is impossible to have your knees that high when sitting down like that. Her knees should point forward, not upward. Her whole body should hunch forward, regarding what she is doing. The pose is very unnatural.
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Thanks for the feedback, fixed like suggested.
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it is really nice but I donΒ΄t like her pose... she looks like she should fall backwards...
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Thanks for the feedback, fixed like suggested
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Should be featured in daily deviations to be fair. Except I don't know how to suggest it.
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Aw thank you very kindly dear, I'm happy you like it!
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C: Just see who featured other DD's and ask them. They usually have what kinds of art they feature on their profile.
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Amazing stuff! Beautiful work! Very Creative as well!
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It's beautiful! I love how the fishes go from paper to paper which is their lake. It seems like the papers became a portal to another world. Great job!
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I wish I had 1% of your artistic talent, because your art is incredible.
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To be perfectly honest, her pose is rather awkward. I feel like she should be falling onto her bottom at any given moment! But aside from that, the coloring is absolutely lovely. 
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This is lovely! I love all the vibrant, yet peaceful colors. Her expression conveys a very distinct emotion! Awesome work. : )
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This is really, really beautiful. I love the concept for this and the balance of colours. The simulated water colour effect is also splendid and I'm impressed with how alove the Koi fish appear.
I have to point out one strange thing though, and that is the girls crouched stance so to speak. I love painting on the floor, but I must say that her position is quite impossible. Painting like this puts an enourmous pressure on limbs and joins. She does look strong legged, but not that strong legged.
Her back is too straight, it should have been bending out to make her hunch over, as well as how the arms should have bended slightly. And for me it looks like her butt is not touching the floor, which is another impossibility.
I respect you for not using reference, even if just for composition and stance, but I'd still advice you to try some of the positions yourself before drawing :] Imagine your character in the wanted position and then try to act it out so you get a feel of how your own body works in said position.
I hope my critique is well received, I'm not trying to sound better knowing, you're really an amazing artist. It just looks odd to me and I am fairly sure no one can maintain such a stance for more than a few seconds tops.
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Thanks dear, read it all, and I did realize that while the anatomy is perfectly fine, the pose is not very possible for a while. I usually do imagine and try my own poses I draw out but didn't this time. But I just kept coloring anyway~
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You're welcome C: I am glad you are not offended. I see no problem with the anatomy either, I would just really hurt my bag if I tried painting like her
It is nothing that ruins the painting, it is still very, very beautiful ^^
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Good to see your art again.
Very beautiful!
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It's so bright and colourful! Fantastic!
I hope that you're feeling well.
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Wait, this is a _rough_ painting?!
... what type of mad skills do you have...
This is incredibly beautiful! The motion in the fishes is eye-catching, and the girl looks really calm (and like she's concentrating on something- she's following the fishes, apparently
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