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Story, art and characters by Anna Podedworna and Katarzyna Redesiuk .
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Yays!!!New chapter!!!!Please show sumthin funny after those...last...sad...pages...*Jumping up and down excitedly*
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Holly smoke just when I thought it couldnt get any more epic you go and do this! GREAT JOB ON THESE!!!!!!
Such brilliant colors and such I wonder if I missed a page lol XD Goes to check XD Cant wait for more!
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wow
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You know, I was actually wondering when you'd put up chapter four. XD Beautiful cover, Akreon!
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I'm not sure if I like this or not. Not to be offensive or anything, of course. X3 Just to be constructive.
The text seems very boring this time around. It seems to have been simply "plopped" on the page and there is very little interest there, especially when compared to the hugely detailed image. Furthermore, there is very little difference between "Chapter IV" and the actual title of the chapter, making them of equal importance in the eyes of the viewer. I dunno, maybe this is just me, but a little more attention to the text design might help this image.
Also the off-center composition feels wrong to me as well. Now again, maybe this is just me, but there's like... an inch of space on the right hand side between the bird and the edge of the canvas, while the birds on the left trail off of the composition. I think it's the fact that the bird on the right is the only bird the viewer can see in complete, clear, obvious detail (due to the light behind it). This draws what I have to imagine is an unwanted amount of attention to that bird when, really, the attention should be on the wolf.
Also the birds on the left appear to have been drawn and colored differently from the ones on the right. The ones at right are more realistic, static, while the ones at the left are more flowing and stylized with a lot more purple in them. This makes the ones on the left feel like they are lighter in color and/or in stronger light and again seems to draw too much attention away from the wolf, upsetting the circular composition of the piece.
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Aaaargh! I hate this cliff-hanger
Wonderful work with the eyes' pattern
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love it! its really beautiful. Do u use photoshop or another software to make your covers and chapters?
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Something crazy is about to happen! o3o Can't wait!
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OMG I love it^^ I feel magic =3
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Beautiful! The eyes and tattoos are absolutely stunning! And the Ravens almost seem like a part of the wolf.
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Ouwaah!
Now I really cannot wait to see the pages of this chapter!
Amazing work!
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O.O When I saw this I laughed stupidly Dx lol!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT AKREON!!!!!!!
The black spirit! the black spiiiiiirrrrriiiittttt!!!!!!
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this cover looks amazing o__O the eyes, specially. Love that dark feeling.
You're doing a wonderful job with this comic ^^ *thumbs up*
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Hm...wyglΔ da ciekawie^^ Czekam na next
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Yes! I have been waiting for this for forever
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Ow wait, are we already on the next chapter
Gebo didn't howl as I expected...
Aw well, I should try to overlook my thoughts and keep in mind that I'm not the director in off-white
Anyway, there is our black spirit
I think it's a she-wolf, but I'll just keep quiet till I find out if I'm wrong again.
You got really cool avatar as a green bunny
Spiderman-bun, Joker-bun and now the weird worm face-bun
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This is brilliant, Anna!
I really like the claws and the eyes
Keep up the good work! <3
OW is by far my fave comic on dA.
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Whow!I'm scared with this look!
Great picture!
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The colors give an eerie, yet awesome feeling...
Sweet! Can't wait to read the next pages!
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awsome i've been waiting to see the black wolf
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Ooh, I take it that's the Black Spirit? I love how the crows are eyeless, and it looks like Blackie's got feathers coming out of his head...
When are new pages coming out?
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Probably around Thursday
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Beautiful! I LOVE HS EYES AND DESIGN!! *faves*
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It's Hati!!!!!! 8DDDD
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hmm... czekam na nastΔ
umieram z ciekawoΕci
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Love teh colors and the designs on the face and floor! But i must say, the fact that the crows have no eyes is brilliant! It makes it creepy but yet so cool!
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