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Published: 2012-09-10 15:36:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 20552; Favourites: 766; Downloads: 252
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her dreams all broken loose.Memories, unconfined,
escaped her past,
they roost now in the tangles
of her disordered present.
Comments: 75
crazyfluteplayer In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 23:39:26 +0000 UTC]
um the poem is great but it's the image that makes me stumble
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AlecBell In reply to crazyfluteplayer [2012-09-11 07:27:58 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you,I hope you visited :devrustymermaid!
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Fairyvicky In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 21:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Waouuuuh awesome!!!! I lové this universe
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AlecBell In reply to Fairyvicky [2012-09-11 07:30:40 +0000 UTC]
I hope you visited ~rustymermaid !
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cskadoz In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 20:46:25 +0000 UTC]
kick in the gut! . . . and so true!
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RavenluvsSesshomaru In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Pretty but not a proper Haiku
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AlecBell In reply to RavenluvsSesshomaru [2012-09-11 07:32:28 +0000 UTC]
Not a Haiku at all in fact. This piece is a tanka, written following the English convention of syllable counting: 5/7/5 77
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AlecBell In reply to rustymermaid [2012-09-11 07:34:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Barbara!
I keep reminding deviants that my piece is made possible by your very imaginative image.
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rustymermaid In reply to AlecBell [2012-09-11 16:56:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Alec!....your words always add more depth.
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Arte-de-Junqueiro [2012-09-10 16:26:03 +0000 UTC]
Well chosen words add an additional dimension to a powerful subject... Great job Alec!!!
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