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AlecBell — Prisoner
Published: 2012-09-10 15:36:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 20552; Favourites: 766; Downloads: 252
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Description her dreams all broken loose.
Memories, unconfined,
escaped her past,

they roost now in the tangles
of her disordered present.
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Comments: 75

LostSoul97 In reply to ??? [2012-09-11 00:03:38 +0000 UTC]

this i can relate to.

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AlecBell In reply to LostSoul97 [2012-09-11 07:38:22 +0000 UTC]

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crazyfluteplayer In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 23:39:26 +0000 UTC]

um the poem is great but it's the image that makes me stumble

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AlecBell In reply to crazyfluteplayer [2012-09-11 07:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you,I hope you visited :devrustymermaid!

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Chaosfive-55 In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 23:31:39 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely!!!!

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AlecBell In reply to Chaosfive-55 [2012-09-11 07:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Chaosfive-55 In reply to AlecBell [2012-09-11 14:47:56 +0000 UTC]

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paserdia In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 23:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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AlecBell In reply to paserdia [2012-09-11 07:28:43 +0000 UTC]

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Trippy4U In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 22:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work Alec

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AlecBell In reply to Trippy4U [2012-09-11 07:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Richard!

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Fairyvicky In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 21:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Waouuuuh awesome!!!! I lové this universe

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AlecBell In reply to Fairyvicky [2012-09-11 07:30:40 +0000 UTC]

I hope you visited ~rustymermaid !

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cskadoz In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 20:46:25 +0000 UTC]

kick in the gut! . . . and so true!

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AlecBell In reply to cskadoz [2012-09-11 07:31:02 +0000 UTC]

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RavenluvsSesshomaru In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Pretty but not a proper Haiku

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AlecBell In reply to RavenluvsSesshomaru [2012-09-11 07:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Not a Haiku at all in fact. This piece is a tanka, written following the English convention of syllable counting: 5/7/5 77

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rustymermaid In reply to ??? [2012-09-10 20:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Alec.

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AlecBell In reply to rustymermaid [2012-09-11 07:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Barbara!

I keep reminding deviants that my piece is made possible by your very imaginative image.

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rustymermaid In reply to AlecBell [2012-09-11 16:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Alec!....your words always add more depth.

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AlecBell In reply to rustymermaid [2012-09-12 07:54:57 +0000 UTC]

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Arte-de-Junqueiro [2012-09-10 16:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Well chosen words add an additional dimension to a powerful subject... Great job Alec!!!

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AlecBell In reply to Arte-de-Junqueiro [2012-09-10 18:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Mel

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Canankk [2012-09-10 15:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful words for a beautiful scene

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AlecBell In reply to Canankk [2012-09-10 18:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Canan

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