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aleph-null — The snow is melting there.
Published: 2005-09-30 04:40:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description The snow is melting there,
there where the sunflowers grow,
there where the rabbits rest and bluebonnets go

The snow is melting there,
there where the hunysuckle dips,
there where the dew dosen't dry, and the hummingbird sips

The snow is meltling there,
there where the spirit lives,
there where the mind forgets and the heart forgives

The snow is melting there
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aleph-null [2007-05-06 00:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think repetition is a cruch of mine.

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sinisterguffaw [2007-05-05 23:31:56 +0000 UTC]

a good pastoral. pure imagery, which leaves all the interpretation to the reader. I'd probably leave out the last line, but other than that, it's perfect.

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miko555 [2005-12-02 07:15:29 +0000 UTC]

i like it ^_^ It gives good visualization

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