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Published: 2016-08-05 23:39:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 598; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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Read The Mists right to lefthad some trouble getting in to the page, sorry bout the late upload
Next: Page 35
Previous: Page 33
First Page: Page 1
Comments questions or critiques are greatly appreciated! (Seriously, they make my day)
Characters and story (c) AlexandeNight
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Comments: 13
AlexandeNight In reply to Anime--Bunny [2018-03-18 04:47:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!Ā
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POLISHhedgieFanGirl [2016-08-06 17:47:43 +0000 UTC]
oh dear, Razen XDĀ
the mists look kinda watery/liquid to me, is that on purpose if i may ask ?
AlexandeNight In reply to POLISHhedgieFanGirl [2016-08-08 17:22:58 +0000 UTC]
The Mists is actually sentient on some level, it can manipulate itself into diffrent fog forms. It's also more dense than normal air, and chooses to fill a space from the bottom up. Some of the watery effect was intentional, but I'm not that good at drawing mist yet so it came out a little too watery XD I was going for a liquid nitrogen effect~ but couldn't quite manage
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POLISHhedgieFanGirl In reply to AlexandeNight [2016-08-08 18:20:58 +0000 UTC]
oooh i can see it now
AlexandeNight In reply to POLISHhedgieFanGirl [2016-08-15 18:45:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for asking! ^^ Questions really help me devolope the story.
I'm glad to hear it ^^ the next pages will see the Mists in actioin, I've been looking forward to these pages a long time
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POLISHhedgieFanGirl In reply to AlexandeNight [2016-08-16 18:40:01 +0000 UTC]
no problem at all ^o^/ !
that's cooool
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AlexandeNight In reply to Circe17 [2016-08-06 05:27:28 +0000 UTC]
XD just that there are right ways and wrong ways to end public speaches. You should keep up a personal of streangth and power when ending speaches or insturctiosn and avoid phrases like "so yeah~" and the like. Razen just was all fired up, but just ended the whole instructional session weirdly is all.
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Circe17 In reply to AlexandeNight [2016-08-06 12:04:24 +0000 UTC]
Got it! Sorry, thank you for explaining
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AlexandeNight In reply to Circe17 [2016-08-07 16:24:07 +0000 UTC]
No problem, thanks for asking I like to know if people have trouble understanding the page flow. I'm too close too the story to tell if it is coherent from one page to the next so these comments are very helpful ^^
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