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mr-mister [2002-07-18 18:25:09 +0000 UTC]

i have no quips about the sun, it looks fine where it is to me. puttin it behind the girl would mean having to cast a dark shadow over her like a sihlouette. the composition is very nice in this. simple but good. sun in the center, girl on one side, palm trees on the other. your color scheme is very great too, gives me a relaxed feelin lookin at it. the see through shirt is very

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mybitch [2002-07-03 01:34:58 +0000 UTC]

maybe u should put the sun behind the girl? but otherwise its great

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paleart [2002-07-03 00:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice, great shirt and glasses, just me maybe but i dont really like the sun, kinda takes away from the hot, i mean, well drawn girl...

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