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Alias00 — Time What Time
Published: 2006-09-04 15:36:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Age is something you can only defineWhen your mind is stuck in time
Time may be a constant, but people die all around
So the secret to immortality hasn’t been found
All you who are wiser and greater than me
Are dying faster, or that’s the way some see
The aging process, a down spiraling smack
The light at the end of the tunnel isn’t white, it’s black
And while the process is heavy and worn
I don’t understand why it’s the young you scorn
We are so few, when you are so great
But you will be the one to decide your own fate
So while you try to bother me with your silly lying
I’ll sit here and laugh because now you are dying.
Comments: 3
I know how you feel about age. I, like you, have been lucky since people always believe I am older than I am. It's nice. People take you more seriously then.
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Wow! I like it a lot! I like the illiteration with the spiraling smack. I esspecially like the line "The light at the end of the tunnel isn't white, it's black".
I enjoy darker poetry. I'm excited to read more!
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Man, that's so true. I happen to be slightly, derangely cynical so I'm going to have to agree with the whole poem. Great job! ^^
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