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AlienationZombie — Consume All
Published: 2008-03-19 07:52:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description There’s a taste of blood
On his voice.
There’s a sense of fear
In his stare.

She moves a little
And hopes he’s staring through her.
But his glazy eyes
Follows every move she makes.

She feels inside her
Something changes.
She bows her head
As a tear hits the ground.

He’s gonna consume all of me;
Leave nothing to be found...
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Comments: 3

fauxdeus [2008-04-20 15:10:40 +0000 UTC]

hey!!! lanklaas gepraat en al daai.

very very good!

i can relate to it, and i'm a female. so take that as a compliment...

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vampyre-hime [2008-03-19 11:33:39 +0000 UTC]

very well written, i like it!

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CocaColaChan [2008-03-19 09:07:47 +0000 UTC]

It's wonderful, and the first two lines are pure genius!! I love the combination of senses in this poem.. Is this the structure sonnets adopt? 3 of 4 and 1 of 2?
I've never been sure...

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