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There’s a taste of bloodOn his voice.
There’s a sense of fear
In his stare.
She moves a little
And hopes he’s staring through her.
But his glazy eyes
Follows every move she makes.
She feels inside her
Something changes.
She bows her head
As a tear hits the ground.
He’s gonna consume all of me;
Leave nothing to be found...
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Comments: 3
fauxdeus [2008-04-20 15:10:40 +0000 UTC]
hey!!! lanklaas gepraat en al daai.
very very good!
i can relate to it, and i'm a female. so take that as a compliment...
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CocaColaChan [2008-03-19 09:07:47 +0000 UTC]
It's wonderful, and the first two lines are pure genius!! I love the combination of senses in this poem.. Is this the structure sonnets adopt? 3 of 4 and 1 of 2?
I've never been sure...
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