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Published: 2011-09-30 09:37:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 31388; Favourites: 543; Downloads: 0
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September 2011. An idea I got a few months ago. What do you think? Idea, composition, improvements?All thoughts are welcome!
EDIT: I made some improvments. The transition where the two houses meet are now more realistic.
EDIT2: Made some major adjustments, darker image, more realistic light.
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be honest this is a "common" senesce now time.....
but I have to say your detail in several broken tiles on the joint area is really impresss
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great works !!
but i think its not your best
miss your realistic manipulation
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Bonjour. I am sorry but my english is too limited ...
Encore une fois c'est une image surprenante (cette maison improbable me fait penser à la Vitra Hauss de Herzog et de Meuron)
Il me semble que l'effet de lumière coté pneu déséquilibre la lecture de l'image (en arrêtant le regard trop tôt ).
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Merci pour le commentaire, content que tu l'aime!
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Bonjour. Le plaisir est pour moi,je suis heureux de participer ( de très loin )à ton travail en le critiquant...
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awesome, man!
I'd only suggest you a little thing, as the gravity: is it right (from up to down)? you may think to add falling ash and little stones from the floating rocks.
You may also think to put a second light source, as a electric one, to light up the right side of the houses. I second LadyRSantis suggestions, and if you want to keep the single light source (sun) you have to darker at least the white "stripes" of the house, just making them a little more gray.
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Good points, I'll consider it, still might need some work. thanks for commenting!
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interesting concept, I like how you mess up with roof sheets on intersections
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thanks, that is a detail I just added. I think it makes it a lot more "realistic" if that is something you can talk about in this context
Erik
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indeed, realistic is not kind of word to describe this, more something like: it makes it more live and dynamic, or in motion, real or not
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It kind of upsets me when random people tell artists what their style is or isn't, I mean, only the artist knows that. This is brilliant by the way, and I love It! 
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Agree, men jag uppskattar konstruktiv kritik med
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ja, det är ju det som gör att man utvecklas
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Wow ! well done, captivating pic !
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You sill have a lot in your mind.
Nice.
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I like this but since you've asked for improvements I have a suggestion: change the lighting a bit. The sun is shining behind the houses but the fence that is facing towards us could be darker - and that way the parts of the house that are towards us could be darker as well and you could add some more shadows to the houses - making them feel more 3-dimensional. There's also an overhanging on the right that is in front of both houses yet the shadow beneath it is treated like the houses it's shading are on the same level - when in reality one house is deeper set back. And then the shadow line that is coming off the house doesn't line up right with the sun. I think you changed it because of the land that is resting on top of that house - but it's still lined up off. I don't know how to set it right though to be honest - just that it looks off, haha - but seriously, this is still really good
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thanks for the feedback! Good points... I might look into that!
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so...will you make the real version of this, some time?
the houses have sort of an artificial "plastic" feel to them. i think they would be nicer with a more realistic appearance...
but you've done a great job, as usual!
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thanks, I'm currently doing some improvements
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better now!
you might also try using an "older looking house" similar to this one;
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where the old wood and painting would make it look more realistic
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On her way along the path, Alice came across a house by chance that did not know it’s top from front or it’s side from underneath...”How odd it seems” she said aloud, “that such a thing should be here now, exactly where it shouldn’t be”
" I cannot tell from where you'd knock, or even if the windows work"
A that moment (as it often did) cheshire’s grin appeared once more... followed closely by the Cat (on which it was most obviously attached) he also spoke about the house, of which he knew a thing or two...” You see the house all twisted ‘bout, because you think it’s really not... but if you stood upon your head, the house would right itself again like rain” Alice thought this sounded oddly sane, and considered all the things she had seen that day... “Maybe, Hatters or timely Hares would stop to consider such actions as sane” Alice began “ But headstands are for others who are not out walking...and not young girls who are on their way to see the Queen“
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i saw that long time ago in my dreams! kinda déjà-vu!
it's great executed. only thing i may criticise is the shadow from the house in relation to the position of the sun.
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dreams are very inspirational. I believe that it's not so wrong, since the edge of the house isn't straight, but it's the shadow of the upper "wrong" house. See what I mean? It might still be slightly off...
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Inte så förtjust i denna, den håller inte din tidigare klass. Du har alltid tidigare haft en synvilla inbyggd i bilderna. Här har du "bara" lagt ihop två bilder. Det skulle vara mer "din stil" om det fanns ställen i bilden med en synvilla, där man inte vet om det hör till ena huset eller det andra. Till exempel om taket på hus 2 gick ihop med farstukvisten på hus 1. Eller om taket på hus 2 gick ihop med taket till ett utskjutande fönster på hus 1. Vet inte vad ett sådant fönster heter eller om det finns på huset på bilden.
Ett annat alternativ kunde vara att ta bort hus1 (det som står rättvänt) och göra det till en stor "rotvälta", fast med ett hus.
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I like it all except I think it would look better if the upper swing was not facing down. Then it would look more like it was the same place in two ways/on two planes.
Just my suggestion.
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I thought a lot about what to do with that detail, but decided to make it hang down... but I see your point. thanks for the feedback!
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Any time.
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I LOVE the idea but it seems to me that you are loosing the organic qualities that make your art so fun to look at. The house looks like digital art whereas the rest of the image looks very natural. I think if it looked as if the houses/planes were actually intersecting, wood meets wood, shingles meet shingles, then it would work 100% for me but right now it looks like digital house meets digital house within a photograph. Maybe it's the lighting that makes it look digitally rendered? Or perhaps this is what you intended as intersecting planes aren't normally a tactile/visual event outside of thoughts and diagrams anyway...and in that case, disregard
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thanks for the feedback, I see your point. It would actually be quite interesting to make it more damaged where the house actually intersect. I'll give it a thought and see if I'll improve it. Thx!
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Great idea and awesome implementation!
My only slight confusion is the lighting on the left side - or the lens flare respectively.
On the left wall of the bottom house and the ceiling part of the top house, seems a bit to bright for me.
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Good point, I'll look in to that. thanks
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great idea, well done, the havoc of the intersecting houses/worlds is on second sight unexpectedly clean, guess this is what makes this such an interesting atmosphere (together with the low sun)
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