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Published: 2001-04-27 21:04:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 461; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 77
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My first full manga project. Please comment/grade.Related content
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Suka is right, that bicep muscle isn't supposed to be shaped like that. The part that connects to the forearm is supposed to come together like the vertex of an angle. It is rounded and doesn't blend well with the rest of the picture. That tiny part sticks out. I don't see a problem with the hair.
I personally feel that you did an excellent job. The blue and orange for the general shirt colors look correct and the lighting and shading is just perfect for the type of all-white background that you used. It would look odd if you used darker colors with an all-white background. This was excellent. Put more DBZ stuff up.
-Bonafide Child has now spoken....
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very good. you are very good at drawing dbz characters. the coloring is awesome. what did you use?
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Gohan's hair wasn't like that until he was older and even then it was only standing up that straight when he went super sayian. But it's much better than I could do! (for now!)
Noah
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while im not a fan of DBZ, i love your coloring job. its soooo shiny!
i also like the angularity of it.
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I love it except for ONE thing, the arm on the left, that one muscle thing looks more like a peach metal plate..o.O;; it sticks out too much in my opinion, otherwise, GOOD JOB! kudos to you on this one >
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Dude! Did you draw this? *droolz* My bitch Gohan looks so hot in that picture, so two thumbs up. *looks around for Nuriko* Good job!
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This is great! The thumb was -great- but the full view revealed a few minor flaws.
The arm and the skin in general is a bit rough for my taste.. but the clothing is great! The blue/white shades are beutiful!
GW!
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good proportions. not really my genre. but definitly a good start in that direction.
LT http://www.longtooth.com
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