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antorin — please dont die
Published: 2007-10-14 22:57:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 836; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 4
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Description Please don’t die
I saw you lying in the grass
You arms spread out at your sides
You looked so peaceful
Please don’t die

I ran to your side
And felt your limp hand
There was no pulse
Please don’t die

I tried to get your heart to start
I yelled for help to
But no one came to your side
Please don’t die

I tried calling an ambulance
But my cell wouldn’t work
I ran to a pay phone
Please don’t die

I dug in my pockets
For some spare change
I couldn’t find any
Please don’t die

I asked a stranger
She gave me a coin
I dialed the number
Please don’t die

I told them to hurry
They didn’t understand
They told me to calm down
Please don’t die

I told them again
They said they’d be right there
I dropped the phone and ran back to you
Please don’t die

I leaned over you
And started to cry
The tears fell on your face
Please don’t die

I can’t say good bye yet
I won’t let you die
Don’t leave me here
Please don’t die

The sirens are heard
And they pull me away
They say it’s too late but I don’t believe
Please don’t die

They put you on a stretcher
And get ready to leave
I run to your side
Please don’t die

They cart you in to a white room
And try to revive you
They say it’s too late
Please don’t die

I hold your hand in mine
And look at you face
I can’t believe you’re gone
Please don’t die

Your hand is cold
So I lay it down
I guess its time to bid fare well
Please don’t die

I lean down
And kiss your cheek
As a tear slides down my face
Please don’t die

I turn to leave
But here a beep your heart has started
Your face is pink
Please don’t die

The tears stream down
As I run to your side
You finally open your eyes
Please don’t die


You look up at me
And smile with glee
I think I finally see
Please don’t die

You saw the heavens
Put did not stay there
Thank you so much
Please don’t die
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Comments: 65

antorin In reply to ??? [2009-12-12 01:07:48 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm not perticularly haha

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ShapeshifterChey In reply to antorin [2009-12-12 14:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Gomen.

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antorin In reply to ShapeshifterChey [2009-12-14 11:24:29 +0000 UTC]

wats gomen??

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ShapeshifterChey In reply to antorin [2009-12-15 22:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Gomen means "sorry" in Japanese.

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antorin In reply to ShapeshifterChey [2009-12-16 11:19:10 +0000 UTC]

ah i c haha i don no much of the langue

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ShapeshifterChey In reply to antorin [2009-12-16 22:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Me either. I just pick up random things from anime.

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antorin In reply to ShapeshifterChey [2009-12-17 21:57:31 +0000 UTC]

lol nice

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ShapeshifterChey In reply to antorin [2009-12-17 23:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh well. It works. ^^

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antorin In reply to ShapeshifterChey [2009-12-18 11:16:19 +0000 UTC]

haha

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ShapeshifterChey In reply to ??? [2009-11-12 22:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Both short attention span and forgetfulness

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Failaine In reply to ??? [2007-10-19 01:33:20 +0000 UTC]

love it.

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antorin In reply to Failaine [2007-10-19 19:53:02 +0000 UTC]

kk ty for the favs and the coments and ill definatly read some of urs wen i get the chance im in a rush rite now thou but thats the first thing on my list for this weekend

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Failaine In reply to antorin [2007-10-19 19:57:38 +0000 UTC]

thx

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OnAhIgHeVeRyDaY In reply to ??? [2007-10-19 00:43:08 +0000 UTC]

i love it! Awesome use of the line 'lease don't die'! it really sets the mood. Great poem.

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