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So you wanna write huh? You got your pen/ keyboard ready? well slow down there because the first rule of writing is to think.Well screw that the first rule is to have inspiration, you need inspiration? Sit down at your tv watch your favourite tv show/movie or go read your favourite book, try and figure out why you like such and such genre and what parts you like about it. Yes it's copying but that's what writing is about, it's about taking things you like and putting them into your own plot. Ever heard of the book "A hero with a thousand faces?" there are only so many plots out there what's important is to mould it into your own creation. However this doesn't mean you write a book called Mayor of the Bracelets and set it in Higherearth -_- you need to use your imagination! and take this hint, often made up names of places and cities sound stupid, look at an atlas or handy dandy ancient name list and mould it into your own. Always always mould! You can find inspiration in even the smallest thing, Verglas for instance was inspired by a picture of a mermaid on the inlet of a manga book and a scene in Beauty and the Beast.
That leads us onto worlds, there are many writers out there who just take this world and put some odds and ends in it to make it different, but why not be different and explain about your world. Take Star Wars for an example it happens in a galaxy far, far away. People like detail even if it's not essential to the plot and of course that leads us onto the most important factor for me anyway:
USE REALISM!
realism is intently important to me when I write, your character has wings? take a note out of Skellig and wonder how a human can fly with such heavy bones? Don't leave people wondering why your character has blonde hair when one of their parent's had black. How did someone manage to get prism like eyes? it's impossible >_<
This leads us onto the most important part of your book. The characters. However you do have a choice, there are rather two different directions to go in, you can do a character based book or a world based book, Lord of the Rings is a world based book and Jane Eyre is a character based book. I'm a character based book myself so i'll be telling you more about that.
A character is the blood of a character based book, whether you have one or more than one person telling the story it's important to remember that these people are the guides who take the reader through the book. THEY MUST BE INTRESTING!!!
Now i'm a writer who doesn't plan, but that doesn't mean they you don't have to, some people may find that planning is the best way to go, me I have it all up here in mah noggin. I find that the character that I write creates themselves as I write, I often don't have an idea of a character's personality in my head until I start writing but this may not be the case with you. The important thing is to build your character, understand their strengths and weaknesses and when you have the ability to go back in your work to certain stages and say "no... this character wouldn't act that way" you know you've got it. A character should be like a friend and even so you may find that some of your characters take on traits of yourself or people around you. This is ok since you write from experience but remember Mary Sue is a no no. Always a no no.
Remember a character just like you learns from the people around them and here's where I get to one of my pet peeves among writing.
Think about how their appearance might affect their personality, i.e. a fat person or a plain person might feel depressed whereas a pretty person would become arrogant. There is no such thing as a purdy person without a bit of arrogance okies? Stop leaving in the world of fairytales and get into realism! Think about where they are in the world, if the world is like our own then it's ok to have red/brown/black haired people all mushed together, but if it's not it's important to think things through. Espically think about skin colours and cultural differences. Also if someone from this world goes into another one, what are the chances of them having the same language? think about that too (I highly recommed the 12 kingdoms if your writing a story about different worlds and travelling between them, it's highly realistic)
Also don't be too optimistic (this is one of my failings) things won't just "go" right for your characters. If they get pulled into another world the chances are very slim that a nice person will just take them in out of nowhere or the dashing hero will appear and save them. Plus what most people forget is finances! the world revolves around money often or not.
Which also leads onto, DO RESEARCH! you're writing a historical novel and you said that they thought that the world was flat, ignorant people may nod their heads but other will probably just laugh at you. A good thought out book with research is probably even good enough to get you published without the inspiration (of course that would be classed as non-fiction ^^) of course trying to pass off a book without research and just going on a bunch of hoaxes and then saying it's highly controversial and true when- eh hem... *coughs* but let's not get into that shall we.
Another thing is people like to be taught when they're not realising it, using science to back up your claims is a good idea. Like Threshold (random program I watch) it's about alien invasion (yea I hear you all groaning) but what makes it good is it's use of science and knowledge to make it seem so real and intresting ^^. It doesn't even show alien space ships, it takes place entirely on earth and without any shots of space anywhere.
Ok moving on, one of the hardest parts of your book to write is the beginning but remember you can always come back and change it when you've moulded your character. So you wanna start huh? you got that burning inspiration? well soz you're gonna have to wait, it's all to easy to go and say and there was such and such boring place and such and such... *yawn* Look at the beginnings of other books, books like Rebecca or The Great Gatsby start with the narrator describing something that has already happened, in fact Rebecca starts with a dream, as does twelve kingdoms which I think is a rather good way to start a book. My father once wrote a story where the main narrator was killed off ten pages in, think about orginality don't you go Teresa called down "tea is ready" which is a bit borish. Other books like Howl's moving castle give a short description of the characters history before fully delving into the story, try and learn from the greats! it'll be hard but you'll eventually start creating your own beginnings.
I'll take a line from Hunchback of notre dame here:
'Give her some slack then reel her in then give her some slack and then reel her in!' it's important to creat atmosphere and curiosity among your readers, someone who gets stuck into thinking for themselves will probably think that your book is genius or might... put down the book and read Hary po- did I say that... eh hem... so try and think about how detective mysteries are played out and
then place it to your novel, give em some slack then reel em in and then- man that's catchy.
Songs are also important as inspirational tools or just to plain advance your story. Listening to Broken (Sonata Arctica) when thinking up The Yew Tree gave me a whole backplot to one of the characters and if you listen to songs about your characters personality it will also give you ideas. Romance songs always help me with writing romance parts -_- think moulin rouge sometimes, and create musical montages of your characters.
Draw, draw even if you're not good at it. It's good to get your characters down on paper and try and understand the way they do indeed look.
Plus and here I'm writing for the younger folks, we've got to admit we don't know everything if you start blabbing on about something without the proper knowledge your going to look like a fool or just insert random ignorant thoughts here and there, or use writing to attack someone or something without the right wisdom then your story is going to look a bit... like a laughing stock... always, always add depth! tell people about parts or characters in your story and see what questions they ask you (People who care about writing if you start talking to a random person on a bus they may think you a little strange). If you can answer them all then well done, if not then try and intrigate it into your story but of course there are always things that can be left a mystery so always imply that is it a mystery!
Also avoid cliches whenever possible unless it's a plot device to show it's a cliche. I found a book in Ottakars called Vampirates -_-... please no more pain! Vampires are slightly... clicheish... UNLESS you do it well! and it can be done well, this often also implies to other such magical creatures and remember shape-shifting is often lead to badness >_<
Oh and put a smexy man in it... for me ^^
So that's it for this installement hope you enjoyed ^^
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Comments: 78
AoiTsuki In reply to ??? [2008-06-17 20:19:52 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing! Do you want me to say what I think about it? or do you just want me to read it?
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Juliusanime In reply to AoiTsuki [2008-06-17 20:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, you can tell me what you think about it and such. BTW, if it sounds like as if things are going too fast or something, it's because it was Language Arts homework.
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sakamya [2008-06-09 02:45:11 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Not so much because I agree with everything, but because you do have quite a few good points that I myself need to work on.
One of the things I don't agree with is that everything has to be explained. The fact that a character is blonde despite the fact that one of thier parents has black hair just adds interest, in my opinion. And it is possible. My brother is living proof of that.
Also, sometimes, with the wings and bones things, no one really cares. Maybe the wings are full of superhuman muscles and nerves that make it possible. If you're going for realisitic, why does your character have wings?
Not to pick it apart, but just to give constructive criticism. But I really did love it!
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AoiTsuki In reply to sakamya [2008-06-12 16:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow thankyou for the comment and the love XD. But yeah for me technicality is everything but I guess it changes from person to person and I actually based that bit on the actual Novel Skellig which I thought was the best novel showing a character with wings in a real setting.
And no probs! thanks for stopping by!
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sakamya In reply to AoiTsuki [2008-06-13 15:46:14 +0000 UTC]
Yep. It all varies! Thanks again!
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lackofevolution [2008-01-23 03:05:35 +0000 UTC]
great piece of advice, however i dont agree that to get inspiration a movie or book youve seen a million times does help, well not for me. inspiration for me comes from seeing or experiencing something new: seeing the world through someone elses eyes. with that said the rest of your piece was insightful and revelant thank you for expressing, thank you for helping me and who evere else is luckly enought to read it
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AoiTsuki In reply to lackofevolution [2008-01-23 21:20:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow thankyou very much! and I can only write from my own experience and for me, getting inspiration from books and movies is how I work. And thankyou I always try to help and I thankyou for your input I appreciate it.
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Fortheland [2008-01-19 09:39:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks heaps for that! really interesting! what do you mean by 'Mary Sue'? hehe.
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AoiTsuki In reply to Fortheland [2008-01-19 09:41:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow no probs! I'm glad you liked it and aah sorry, this should clear things up: [link]
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Daktari92 [2007-07-20 14:39:13 +0000 UTC]
I started writing a story a year ago, and now I'm kinda stucked. My inspirition is not gone, I just don't know how to put my ideas together, and that really bothers me, 'cause I've already past the 120th page. I've written lots of other half stories the last few years, that always end up somewhere in a lonely place on my computer >.< I've never ever put anything I've written on DA, 'cause I'm Dutch, and translating to english is still too hard for me, unfortunately..... Do you've any tips for me to fix the problem with my story? Btw, your tutorial is wicked, very well done, I think you helped many people out^^
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AoiTsuki In reply to Daktari92 [2007-07-21 14:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Firstly wow, thankyou very much I'm glad that my tutorial helped and I can help because I myself have been through the same .
Until about a year ago I was exactly like you all I did was write half stories and I found it really hard to fully get into one. Writing for everybody is different I don't know if you plan but if you don't then maybe planning is something you could try to get all your ideas sorted out, I found it really helped when I wrote down things in a notebook or used a computer program such as Novel Writer Professional. Also when I do write I do have a rough idea of where I'm going but in my head I take it one scene at a time and that makes it less scary when you have so many ideas at once.
However if that doesn't work then it may be that the story doesn't really have a backbone, i.e. what's the plot, what's going to happen next, did you just start this story with only one idea in mind? This was my failing as I would write fervently with one idea (which was say, girl finds a magical hat and does magical things with it- and that was it) until that idea became boring and I moved onto something else. What changed when I started writing longer books was that I left the book open, new plots could enter, I could have more than five characters, I could create a world and talk about that when things got stale.
Though you say that your inspiration hasn't gone, what I find when a book get hard to write is that my inspiration has gone and that when I do suddenly get a flash of inspiration say through a TV program I like or artwork or even music I find it much easier to write and that I write much better! Maybe you just need to find your muse again, try to find what it was about the story that interested you to begin with and try to experience that same rush again.
Eventually my last and final resort is to well start something new and often when I did start something new I would realize things about my old work that I didn't before, like how much I liked the main character, how I would of liked to expand on that, how much I really loved it and then I would go back to it. I remember a friend of mine who would write something stop, write something new and then say a year later go back to that previous work. I also used said friend to help me when I got stuck, I would send her my draft and ask her what was wrong with it and she would help me so maybe you can send your draft to someone that you trust enough with it to help you (incidentally I myself never put up my works in progress on DA, I just don't trust the general populace not to rip it apart >_<
Anyway I hope that helped ^^ and if you need anymore assistance then I'll be happy to help, there is nothing I love more to write about then writing
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Daktari92 In reply to AoiTsuki [2007-07-22 17:31:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, I actually started my book without really knowing what would happen. But, the further I got, the more I realized what they (the four main characters and their friends) had to do. Your tip about the end, is really intresting. You mean, that I should not plan everyting *containing the end*, so my mind is free to take different roads? That would clear up much, 'couse I always thougt: If I know the end, and how they got to the end, it will be easier. I mean, I wrote once everything in rough form *only a few sentences, a bit of a list* but I think there's my fault: I just made in one day the whole story, but didn't thought of the fact that a few sentences can never be everything a book contains. And I was kind of dissapointed when I found out that it wasn't that easy. But if I let my story take me, in state of me taking a tight control over the story, maybe I will have less struggling with writing it! And I'll do as you suggest: write every little piece down, if I've inspiration. It happens a lot that I suddenly know something that could happen in my story, but only a little piece, not even a whole scene, and forget it later. Thanks a bunch for your helpful tips, I was really in need of someone that could help me, and actually knew where I was talking about. Thanks again and happy writing!
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AoiTsuki In reply to Daktari92 [2007-07-22 19:09:59 +0000 UTC]
No problemo! I'm glad to have helped! and you too
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LyndonArmitage [2006-08-12 21:12:38 +0000 UTC]
THis is exellent! I will attempt to remeebr things in here. ( Geez apparently my memoreis crap but can remmeber things from when i was 5
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AoiTsuki In reply to LyndonArmitage [2006-08-13 11:15:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow! thankyou so much for the comment and for the fav ^^ Hope it helps
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Willowelf [2006-01-30 17:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I forgot to add how much I liked your tutorial 8) v.good stuff.
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Willowelf In reply to ??? [2006-01-30 17:59:16 +0000 UTC]
"nother thing is people like to be taught when they're not realising it, using science to back up your claims is a good idea." 8) way ahead of you sister. Geography's also useful if you're making up your own world, but of course as is history. That's why I based my book in a valley - I know why people settle in valleys, so I can explain it.
My book's going to end up having a lot of sort of religion stuffs in it too...so *wince* I may have to refine it a little before I write anymore. I can't just pluck things out of thin air, because I know I'm going to catch myself out.
oh and I've a dilemma
ok...Raefn = schmexy man savvy?
"other such magical creatures and remember shape-shifting is often lead to badness" - like the most 'beautiful elf in the world' in Eragon, with her waterfall hair and sculpted lips. Seriously, that guys mashed together LOTR, the wizard of earthsea, dragonrider's of pern and god knows how many other fantasy novels I have yet to read into his book. But I think the first three are the main ones. I mean, there's these 'hidden' people called the Valar, and they're just -so- much like lothlorien, with dwarves not being allowed in and shit, and then there's the whole arya (most beautiful elf in the world) complex, she's basically arwen. And the thing that worries me is that Eragon is the sort of story I wrote when I was 11 - my first ever novel o_0...Eragon is so much like Dirgon it's untrue. That's why I gave up on writing elves when I was 14 seriously. I can't write them without them being MS or GS's. I'm working on the werewolf I've always wanted in a story...but it's hard not to turn him into Remus X_x
Anywho, the thing I wanted to ask your opinion on was Raefn -
ok. He can shapeshift. Ever since I created him he was able to shape shift. BUT I was wondering if it would be better if the shifting was in his mind, and not for real? Like he believed himself to be a horse, but in actual fact he wasn't?
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AoiTsuki In reply to Willowelf [2006-01-30 18:09:28 +0000 UTC]
0_0 *tries very hard not to laugh* I'm a horse I'm a horse! wheeee! (sorry image that popped into my mind) and that's a good idea ^^ but a confusing one can you kinda expand? -_- well if he can get Eragon published then there's hope for the rest of us at like... our age.... and yay Remus.. .but noo Remus...
and yes Raefn = schemexy sauve man savvy ^^
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Willowelf In reply to AoiTsuki [2006-01-30 18:40:44 +0000 UTC]
well that's basically it 8) - if you can sort of think of how the unicorn thought she was still a unicorn when she got turned into a human, raefn'd think he was a horse when in reality he would be still a horse. Sort of like real life lycanthropes, who think they can turn into wolves.
And well...he only got Eragon published because his parents ran a publishing company, then they sorta when all round the country boosting publicity, and then he got a deal from a 'real' publisher -_-; he had help - there was no way something that crap would have got published otherwise.
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AoiTsuki In reply to Willowelf [2006-01-30 20:28:45 +0000 UTC]
hahah and awww and yes that's a very good idea *thumbs up* and let him not forget that's he's human like in Last Unicorn
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Willowelf In reply to AoiTsuki [2006-01-30 21:39:12 +0000 UTC]
"raefn'd think he was a horse when in reality he would be still a horse"
o_O I meant to say
"raefn'd think he was a horse when in reality he would be still a HUMAN"
but thankyou on guidance - I sort of want to make the pagan's appear like all mysterious and things, but in reality, it's just rumour mongering that made them all mysterious and stuff - so their belief (like the belief that they can shapeshift) became sort of a legend, and people believe they can really do all these amasing things 8)
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AoiTsuki In reply to Willowelf [2006-01-31 16:41:55 +0000 UTC]
oh shiny!
and signature = o_0!
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Willowelf In reply to AoiTsuki [2006-01-31 17:18:11 +0000 UTC]
Signature = 'I wanted to change it - so I went quote hunting again 8)'
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