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preface #1:
this was drawn as a christmas present for a 16 year old boy, and this is what he requested, so please forgive the panty shot and out-of-character-ness ;;;

preface #2:
as the title says, i'm most definitely not finished yet. i have not yet begun to color... i filled in the base colors for everything for two reasons: 1) coloring helps me find mistakes in my inking, and 2) for a better picture of what it will look like closer to finished. it wouldn't have been as clear if i had just uploaded the line art.

corollary to preface #2: i know it looks like i colored outside the lines on part of her hair and boots, but that's just photoshop being wonky. the actual thing is much bigger than this and i resized it without merging the layers first, so it did some strange things.

OKAY, now that that's over with, i submitted this now for constructive criticism...lots and lots of constructive criticism...so please, criticize away!

if by some strange twist of fate you happen to like this a lot, please spare the love for the finished version. bah, who am i kidding...

EDIT: fixed a few things pointed out by , mike, and roger.

Description
preface #1:
this was drawn as a christmas present for a 16 year old boy, and this is what he requested, so please forgive the panty shot and out-of-character-ness ;;;

preface #2:
as the title says, i'm most definitely not finished yet. i have not yet begun to color... i filled in the base colors for everything for two reasons: 1) coloring helps me find mistakes in my inking, and 2) for a better picture of what it will look like closer to finished. it wouldn't have been as clear if i had just uploaded the line art.

corollary to preface #2: i know it looks like i colored outside the lines on part of her hair and boots, but that's just photoshop being wonky. the actual thing is much bigger than this and i resized it without merging the layers first, so it did some strange things.

OKAY, now that that's over with, i submitted this now for constructive criticism...lots and lots of constructive criticism...so please, criticize away!

if by some strange twist of fate you happen to like this a lot, please spare the love for the finished version. bah, who am i kidding...

EDIT: fixed a few things pointed out by , mike, and roger.