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arcangle — Twisted Tree
Published: 2003-07-18 05:10:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 19
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A twisted treeSeems to be
Caught up in a swirling spiral
of stupidity
From myself and truth
I flee
Or beg others
to just let it be
Wrapping around trunk and branches, though
Are lifetimes of experience my spirit knows
And so
This twisted tree --- me ---
may seem different, almost dark, scary and unyielding
Churning
I’m yearning
For those who will climb
And in time
I’ll begin to bear leaves
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Comments: 3
image is interesting i must say
i like the apparent figure in it
anyways onto the poem
"Seems to be me"
- "seems to be" will do fine
"to just let me be"
- "to leave me be"
this is a completely different style than what im used to haha
dont say "me" too much though i find that it detracts from the poem
just hint it at the end and i think it will be enough
make it subtle until the end
or dont even reveal that you are the tree, just write it so that it hints towards that fact
original though
din enjoy this as much as some of your other poems though
soz =\
lataz
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Really good... i like it a lot... it goes really nice and i can relate to the thoughts...
you are talented for this girl...
like the image you added too
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