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fly me highI fall down
get back up - spin around…………..you can’t be found
you’ll take me
waste me
colours best disguised by their contrasts
souls fragmented by bomb blasts
shooting star
there you are
both here and far
my life blood love
drains
plunges down through the sky
soars up into the sea
vein valves burst – spilling onto your soil
nourishing your soul
stream of light
bright
-but dim
moonbeam on my skin
snowflake on my tongue
pleasures to be sung
maybe the more life is pain
the more time we gain
but soon nothing will remain
what am I if I live?
What am I if I die?
Can I be a star in the sky – your star in the sky?
Breathing pure light and brilliance
Shooting glimmer rays down
Injecting your heart
Melting that arctic part
At night you can raise your face to the sky
And I will radiate for you
Twinkle
Sprinkle my stardust down
To caress your face with my moonbeam kisses
You know you have my heart
Just take it and leave
But hurry, please
‘cuz my life blood love
has drained
plunged down through the sky
soared up into the sea
my vein valves burst
spilt onto your soil
nourished your soul
but now I must go
with that last drop
of my life blood love
it’s now time to let my star glow
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Comments: 3
"you’ll take me
waste me
colours best disguised by their contrasts
souls fragmented by bomb blasts
"
i really like this part. beautifull really.
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I love the flow in this.. the rhyming is perfect in this.
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poems held hostage?
anyways
this poem is sounds like you got your heart stolen but you dont really mind...
its giving off a few strange messages to me
i cant really define this poem properly, maybe because its unclear as to what exactly you were trying to convey.
it does make a strange sort of sense like i understand its feelings and not its emotions if you know what i mean? probli cos your heart was in it
the last stanza is great IMHO
albeit abstract but very good poem
it definitely has that feel where you write your thoughts and heart out
thoughts just flying out everywhere
but still i like it despite the randomness
reminds me of how my brain really works lolz
its all good
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