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Aria-Hope — Run Hunter Run! (First animation ever!)
Published: 2018-02-14 03:17:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 860; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Well I've never animated before! But with the help of references, and advice from my friends I think this turned out to be a pretty dang good animation!Note, I would love any constructive criticism possible! I am very new to this and I would love to hear your thoughts!
But please note that I am using Fire alpaca, its not the best at animation
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Comments: 8
Seems fairly smooth, and the shape and size of the character doesn't seem to morph or anything. For the motion itself, I don't draw or animate humans much, so my knowledge of anatomy may be a bit off. The leg movement seems pretty good, although something seems off with the arms. Particularly the right arm. I think it may be that it moves a touch too slowly when swinging up by the head. The character also seems to spring back ever so slightly after stepping with the right leg. It just makes it look a touch off in my opinion.
Overall this is really good! Especially since it's your first animation! My first animation had like, 3 frames, and it looked like crap!
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That's actually really good! The little motion lines (I don't know the correct term whoops haha) are a little too obvious, but hey nothing is perfect! It's still really good uwu
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for a first animation thats heckin good =O a little unsmooth perhaps though? maybe add some more inbetweens, the rest i think will just improve with practice/repetition
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thats really good! :3
as for my criticism : just the legs Xd
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