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Published: 2018-04-23 19:34:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1181; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 10
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twitter.com/ArtGuyKaiA picture idea that I had wanted to do for a long time, but, yknow, procrastinated.
finally got it done yesterday
Feedback and criticisms not only welcomed but wanted.
watch and follow for more of my work if you like it, it really helps me out and I really appreciate it!
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Her expression and the shading on her face are top notch. Special mention to the lip-pout. Also the perspective of the scene is pretty impressive, you've made a very believable window into this girl's life. The colour palette is lovely, and has a slightly cozy vibe.
On the flipside, her anatomy could be a bit better, her breasts seem to be facing forwards more than her shoulders suggest. This is something I struggle with too!
Your depth of field / vignette blur is very good too - though maybe a bit more blur on the tiles in the background, and less blur on the book in the foreground. But i'm just being picky at this point.
Final shout out to the waitress' notepad and the mug, both of which look really convincing!
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Thank you so much for this critique! I always appreciate the feedback as they always help me improve. Thanks so much for your comments on her facial shading and lips. I took quite a bit of time dealing with trial and error to make it look right. Im glad you like the color palette, i was going for relaxing and cozy, just like you said. So i'm glad that was good. I see what you mean about her breasts and general position of her body, ill be sure to play close attention to that next time around. I cant believe if forgot to blur the tiles! that should've been common sense for me, i feel kinda silly now ha ha. Im glad you like the picture! your critique definitely helped me out!
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This looks lovely! I like her expression and the detail of the environment~
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ItΒ΄s a nice piece, congrats, I can see that you take your time to make it.Β
I have a few corrections to it:
1. Her neck is very large.
2. Her ear is too big.Β
3. The waitress seems too small compare to her, I know that she is in perspective, but she should be bigger.Β
I like to keep the good things for the ending so:
1. I really like how you did the blur effect and the textures.Β
2. Her expression and posture seems very natural, congrats for that 
3. I really really like her eyes 
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Thank you! i'm glad you like it. It did take me a while to make it. I do see what you mean about her neck and the waitress. But I especially know about the ear, After i was putting on the finishing touches I noticed her ear was way too big, but at that point I couldn't go back and fix it, it still upsets me to look at that ear XD.
Im glad you like the blur effects, i would've added a little more to the tiles, but I forgot. Im really glad you like her expression and eyes, there something I worked particularly hard on.
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love the blurring effect around the edges, really adds to the whole daydreamy feel
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Thank you so much! I've been practicing editing my drawings in Photoshop for a while, its nice to know its paying off! i'm glad you like it
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