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We all know that Breadwinners was one of the worst cartoons made. But what if we changed that?

I thought it would be fun to rewrite Breadwinners (the best I can mind you), and see if I can make it more passable. So let's get into the new information on Breadwinners

New Show Title: The Tale of the Whole Grain Fugitives
Setting: The Winged West (Western genre)

Plot: Taken place in the Winged West, an illegal bread mining company, called Bread Crumbs, was being hunted by everyone for ages but no one can catch the company. The newest members being chased are Simon (Sway Sway), a psychotic fugitive trying to keep his family name by any means necessary. Brendy (Buhduce) is Simon's right hand man whose usually the voice of reason for their crimes. So these two criminals run from the sheriff and mayor or else their mine and the family heritage will be gone for good.

Design Changes:

Sway Sway/ Simon: new name and I made look more like a cowboy fugitive. With his cowboy hat, western shirt and pants, and a mask over his eyes to hide his identity fully. Kept his personality the same tho.

Buhduce/ Brendy: also a new name and made him look more regal with a bowler hat and suit. I also gave him a monocle to add to the classiness. I also gave him a new personality as the voice of reason of the duo, being smarter and more like a father figure for Simon.

So that's the full rewrite of Breadwinners, at least for the main plot. I hope I did a good job.

Description
We all know that Breadwinners was one of the worst cartoons made. But what if we changed that?

I thought it would be fun to rewrite Breadwinners (the best I can mind you), and see if I can make it more passable. So let's get into the new information on Breadwinners

New Show Title: The Tale of the Whole Grain Fugitives
Setting: The Winged West (Western genre)

Plot: Taken place in the Winged West, an illegal bread mining company, called Bread Crumbs, was being hunted by everyone for ages but no one can catch the company. The newest members being chased are Simon (Sway Sway), a psychotic fugitive trying to keep his family name by any means necessary. Brendy (Buhduce) is Simon's right hand man whose usually the voice of reason for their crimes. So these two criminals run from the sheriff and mayor or else their mine and the family heritage will be gone for good.

Design Changes:

Sway Sway/ Simon: new name and I made look more like a cowboy fugitive. With his cowboy hat, western shirt and pants, and a mask over his eyes to hide his identity fully. Kept his personality the same tho.

Buhduce/ Brendy: also a new name and made him look more regal with a bowler hat and suit. I also gave him a monocle to add to the classiness. I also gave him a new personality as the voice of reason of the duo, being smarter and more like a father figure for Simon.

So that's the full rewrite of Breadwinners, at least for the main plot. I hope I did a good job.