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Published: 2017-10-06 00:59:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 205; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Because of my medical history, I feel it's important to state this upfront:  This is a
work of fiction.  It takes place in a superhero world.  I'm not suicidal myself right now,
nor experiencing psychosis again.



Darling,
                                                                            I'm not mad-- I CAN'T be mad-- for
                                                                               v  what you did when mind-controlled.
I just want you to know, everything I said is true.  It just isn't the whole truth.
I'm sorry for letting you go with a lie.  I hope you get him.  Come home safe, my love.

And move on.  Sal likes you.  She likes you a lot.  She tries to be respectful, but she's
bad at hiding it.  If you want to honor my memory, take down the bastard.  I need to know
that you're happy without me.  "Don't cling to me in your heart," right? okay?

I love you.  The rest of the truth is that I wasn't really mad at you for not going after
him right away.  I'm a little bit mad that you tried to take responsibility for his actions,
because hon, I'm smarter than that, I knew what was really happening.  But the real reason I
was mad at you was because you saved my life.  I don't think you get it I love you.
Please don't tell yourself that you should have stayed.  I would still have found a way.

400 years is too long to wait for old age to come.  I'm sorry that you don't understand
that.  I'm not like you, darling.  I can't rejoice in life when everything I knew is gone.
I'm so sorry. Please love Sal instead.

Please love Sal instead.

XO
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