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Published: 2018-02-15 13:02:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 27423; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 0
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FINALLY!
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So I just casually stumbled upon this page and thought: Man. This look pretty cool, wonder what's going on?
I am now back here from bingeing the whole thing and oh boy, you've got me stringed.
Some pages that really stood out to me were 4, 10 and 23. I love that scratchy style and the strong crosshatching gives off a powerful feeling of insanity, not to mention that your art-style in general for this comic is really neat. It's rough and kinda rough around the edges, yet you are never in doubt what is going on in the picture. There are a few places where the setup and flow of the speech-bubbles are kinda weird, and you might have to look twice to find the right flow, but seeing as that's all I have to say on that, that's really something insignificant compared to all that is great about this.
This is really good my dude and I am looking forward to the next page!
Keep up the great work!
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aw thanks so much for your support!
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Papyrus to win for sure !!!!
From Mishy.
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In my opinion PapyrusΒ can very easily come out of this situation. He can just summon Blaster and stand on itΒ
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that's an idea..! but really risky
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I see three ways that Paps comes on top, but iβm not gonna say anything.
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God i hate flowey soo much
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methinks Pap's is gonna take the third option and shank Flowey in the face XD
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That's ASGORE-y as it gets
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No Paps! Don't listen to him! He'll betray you!!!
*shoves Flowey hard, flowey lets go of Papyrus to balance himself
*uses one of Flowey's roots to swing and catch Papyrus
*lands safely on the ground
There, this is way better than before!
*You suddenly remember that it's not your choice of changing the story, and that only the author can
(Cries )
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you DO know Paps is still gonna kill you, right?
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If datsΒ means he'll be happy and everyone else is, then I'll just let him take mah soul freely!!!!!!!!!!!1 FOR THE SAKE OF EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah kinda figured Papyrus wouldn't win that easily. Flowey isn't exactly a pushover.
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