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Published: 2007-03-25 09:36:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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you can keep up the actbut the curtain has fallen
we can see though the bullshit
no ones fooled anymore
and you've done it again
thought of only yourself
and its hard to forgive
and I don't bargain well
bottle in hand but words from the heart
I'm tired of this worn out excuse
a poor alter ego cant erase what you've said
truth runs cold and it only increases
I know I have felt it and you meant what you said
you shouldn't burn bridges
and with me you'll soon learn
that I never stay somewhere where I know I'll get burned
open your eyes and remember this night
or will you remember?
bottle up, bullshit out
I dont stick around to fight
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Comments: 2
paintedmaru [2007-03-26 05:33:29 +0000 UTC]
mmmhmmm....he's getting one hell of a chopping lately. i agree with kyle's comment of how it flows and so on. and my brain totally just shut off. i forgot what i was gonna say....
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Honorsystem [2007-03-25 16:53:07 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like an interesting night. I like the poem, like your others, it flows really well and the diction really conveys your tone.
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