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AuthenticLogic — I Accept
Published: 2006-02-26 06:58:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Oh no, you just had toYou had to dare me
You had to tell me I can’t
You dared me
You dared me to what?
What did you tell me I can’t do?
Oh that’s right. Write
You dared me to write
You dared me to write?
Then write I will
I will right and I will be right
I will write poetry
I will write tales
And all the while I will right wrongs
Right the wrongs of foolish challenges
Such as this one
So indeed, I will write
I will write words
Words that jolt through your mind
Like a hundred watts of electricity
Coursing through your neurons
Cultivating your thoughts into
Great images encompassing the infinity
That we call the mind
I will write about that which
Words will almost refuse to allow me to
Express that which I wish to
Bless, bestow, and blow all over the expanse
Of the infinity
That we call the mind.
Words that hold a different meaning
For each and everyone of you
Each and every one
To whom I dedicate
This very poem
Wait, what poem?
You dared me to write, right?
Well here it is:
Oop!
You missed it.
Comments: 3
I liked the transgression at the beginning, it was very smooth, but it lost the majority of the smoothness near the end. But it is an amazing poem, and it follows the previous poem nicely.
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interesting piece. I like they way this goes. Though if I may be so bold as to critique this I would say to add more punctuation. Punctuation will give it form, which in turn will make it a more easier, more flowing rhythm. Other than that its a really good piece.
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