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Published: 2003-01-12 02:56:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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His eyes,full of shallow love.
Intoxicated smile,
covering reality.
His touch,
to care.
No difference,
hatred dwells.
His addiction,
to be happy.
Inside of confusion,
lost the ablitity.
His tears,
of emotion.
Declaring dominance,
revealing the truth.
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Comments: 2
emphaticdelusion [2003-08-22 16:15:48 +0000 UTC]
Siiting by the ocean shore
looking forward into darkened depths
Drowning in her sorrow
Sinking in her emptiness
Gave her the world
she became the weight
crushing undertow of emotion
trickling blood of hate
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Very nice poem u've written.
Infatuation and love go not hand in hand.
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inncent-angel [2003-03-08 07:58:39 +0000 UTC]
Blown to proportion
Her words killing me deeper then any knife can reach
Heart beats cold sweat on my face
Love turns to hatered.... feelings I try to leave behind all in the dark
You said you loved me and instead you cut out my heart
No emotions, No Pitty, All feelings in vain just for you.....
Just wrote it of top of my head sorta to comtemplate with your poem but I think mine is stupided look at my gallery for real poetry by me
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