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awesomesauce — advance in romance
Published: 2005-02-07 00:55:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description fortitude, fortitude
whenceforth my faith construed
liberating only that
which can be seen
by blind and sightless child

mirror image of perfection
realise youre uniquely obsolete
                  completely absolute

you breathe only when you sigh
your beauty overflows from your eyes
beginning with a laugh
ending with his song

   "ill look at you upside down
    so i can see what you see
    wanting not to want
    happiness is found"

this barrier breached
an advance in romance
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girlwithabrokenheart [2005-02-08 00:24:06 +0000 UTC]

"you breathe only when you sigh
your beauty overflows from your eyes
beginning with a laugh
ending withthis song"

I love that part most especially.... *lil sigh* the whole poem is beautiful Adam. oh but I like that part best.

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lipsxeyesxback [2005-02-07 21:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow...thats so wonderful. I think i read it about 10 times over. I just wanted to catch ever word. I....I can't tell you how much i love this. Babe what does it mean...to you anyway. Everybody gets what they want out of it and what it means to them but, you wrote it....what is it about?

::iwishtheyhadfairywings::

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Srfgurl5 [2005-02-07 19:50:47 +0000 UTC]

I think its awesome

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