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awesomesauce — apathy or entropy?
Published: 2004-07-21 18:33:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 14
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Description he's six feet under
like the granite glow of death
he's dead, no wonder
i cant hear his soft chirps of sickness
shaking his fists
he glared into the opposition
this depth has given him
a greater power over life

he pulled the trigger
expounging the legacy
knowing his god had forsaken his name
four shots penetrating deep into his mind
like a polaroid that captures the soul
piercing through flesh and developing the pain
coming out of focus with recoal of stupor
hig god was drunk and beat back his people

can it be apathy?
pull it together
this puzzle of malice organized
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Comments: 3

devur [2004-09-09 23:32:49 +0000 UTC]

...I don't know what to say. Wow, I guess, though it really doesn't do it justice. This is just...I'm stunned.

(I read the poems other than what I've commented on today, I just couldn't think of anything important to say.)

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EmoHeartBleeds [2004-07-25 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]

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Srfgurl5 [2004-07-21 20:23:30 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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