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beginning brings new sensationcontent with the bond between
the inside ending in such saddened release
the last accelerando of demise
that this climax of touch brings
the warmth that transcends all inhibitions
and sees the sunset for the blind
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girlwithabrokenheart [2004-08-04 07:37:22 +0000 UTC]
personally... I think the 2nd one is better. but they're both good, I just like the 2nd one better and think its better written. *shrugs* but good job on both
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