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awesomesauce — playing his passions
Published: 2004-07-21 18:17:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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Description she stares into oblivion
  right in his eyes
bringing herself to kneel on the pavement
             of that playground
                 which he has made

and bringing with it
      games of dismay
                 and forbiddeness
                        and longing

finding the game to be treacherous
     and the onset grimace with ignoranced adoration
and when the final move is made
       the king will fall
             and the game lost
   the precipice of condemnation
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Comments: 6

brandi-dawn-777 [2004-08-31 19:07:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome poem!

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girlwithabrokenheart [2004-08-04 07:38:23 +0000 UTC]

wonderful job! and yeah, rad picture. *clap clap*

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Elerrina [2004-07-22 15:43:54 +0000 UTC]

wow.

and that photo is awesome too ....

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Pertevivro [2004-07-22 02:47:50 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is a terrific poem i love it adam

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Srfgurl5 [2004-07-21 20:21:37 +0000 UTC]

I think this is my favorite...I really really like this one

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AnnwnArts [2004-07-21 18:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant poem and photo to match

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