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falsedelic [2013-09-24 12:13:22 +0000 UTC]

I really like the idea of presenting digital comics in this format. It works on a monitor way better than trying to imitate a printed comic format. Your work may be improved by varying the camera angles and zoom a bit more. The first few panels were very similar and using closeups or differing POV would have added more interest. You also may also consider breaking each panel, which basically fill the computer screen, with subpanels (horizontal, verticle, round, diaganal) so more action can take place on a screen and to provide more contrast and interest. Keep in mind that the panel layout is part of the overall design along with the typography, balloons, etc. I like the use of different fonts per character as well.

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