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AznUnderdoG — Dissolution

Published: 2004-04-15 10:39:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1415; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 64
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Description “How fatefully romantic, that you will watch her die tonight. Wouldn’t you agree? You won’t take the shot, you can’t, because you aren’t the killer you used to be.”
The blood boiled beneath my skin as I focused on the exact mark where I had to strike.
“NO!” my voice thundered across the room in a final attempt to reject my decision. Eyes glowing with fiery rage, I felt my self-restraint, my promise, and my conscience viciously tearing in two. And when I met Abel’s demonic smile it happened.
I closed my eyes and raised my regretful weapon. Abel was shocked. In the darkness I felt Audrey watching. I squeezed the trigger and unleashed death. The world went silent. Everything in my body shrieked in disbelief. A tiny brass shell emerged from cold black steel and a streak of fire and metal hurtled towards them. It penetrated with thunderous force through Audrey’s heart, and exploded out of his. Abel fell backwards and released her, the hole in his chest still smoldering, left a tiny trail of smoke across the air.
It was getting harder to breathe, and I'm pretty sure one of my lungs just collapsed.
Audrey never took her eyes off me, trusting me, believing in words I had previously said. Unable to move, I watched Audrey’s trembling legs give from beneath and bring her to her knees. Memories hit me quickly in white flashes.“I brought you nothing but pain and terror,” I hoarsely whispered, “our time together was a slow and cruel death, I tried, and despite my defiance, fate brought my hand to your throat.” Her stare turned desperate and confused, piercing, as if she were reaching across the floor through my eyes. A pair of tears emerged and I thought she would scream, I thought she would curse my name; instead her brows wrinkled upwards in the saddest horror. Not once did Audrey’s eyes leave mine, even in death. She clung to that last breath and faded from my eyes grasp without a single word to sooth or wound me.

(excerpt from the story I am writing with these characters)
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Comments: 14

Aszura [2007-08-05 21:19:33 +0000 UTC]

That's awsome. . .


This may seem odd, but I reacognize the paper texture, is it one of those journals that can be bought from Hot topic. Sorry random, but curious.

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Gamewiz234 [2004-04-19 16:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Detail is CRAZY good..! @_@

I like the shattered/dispersed thing you did with Ian's lower body.

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Anime-style-Josh [2004-04-18 19:09:22 +0000 UTC]

nice man...

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pandasanx [2004-04-18 05:01:11 +0000 UTC]

sniffle* sad =/.. Man your work is awesome, im speachless what kinna drawing tools do you use?

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NoAngelHonestly [2004-04-15 20:38:14 +0000 UTC]

sad story but your work is very nice.. great job on the shading.. now i'm going explore your

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psychoticchic69 [2004-04-15 15:55:42 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome... great detail and beautiful

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Naunen [2004-04-15 13:00:21 +0000 UTC]

It's so sad... Stories like that are usually really big.

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IndianRose [2004-04-15 12:21:11 +0000 UTC]

I love this especially the story behind it. Very sad.
Brilliant drawing, beautiful anatomy.

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gunmetaljacket [2004-04-15 11:22:33 +0000 UTC]

KYAAAAA!!! thats soo...cool and sad at the same time! WHY OH WHY did she have to die!?!?

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theelfhybrid [2004-04-15 11:18:20 +0000 UTC]

This was awesome. Or Fantastic, whichever one you like best!
Nothing to critisize here. (that would be out of plain jealousy)
This is much,much better than I'll ever do. So rock on,dude!

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Shio [2004-04-15 10:57:42 +0000 UTC]

wao~!! nice shadowing~!!!

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SidharthChaturvedi [2004-04-15 10:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely drawn

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acre-010 [2004-04-15 10:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool drawing... goes well with your description...

Vash the Stampede...Trigun's awesome

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Kazechan [2004-04-15 10:42:30 +0000 UTC]

-ssniff-...-sob-..... That's so saaad!!! -sniffle-

Anyway..this looks ReALLY greeaaat!! +fav!! (duh!! ^-^)

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