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Published: 2018-10-28 15:00:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 418; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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This version turned out WAAAAAAYYYY better ;u;Did a redraw of my old firestar picture:
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Character belongs to (c) Erin Hunter!
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RareSpeciman [2018-10-28 15:45:24 +0000 UTC]
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I saw the original drawing you did and its definitely a huge improvement I have say. I have to say I don't have much to say about it structurally. The anatomy is great. My only two critiques about this is the line weight and the over exposure.
First, the light weight is alright for the majority of the drawing but the light lines around the eyes doesn't help. The eyes don't pop out along with the nose and mouth. I'd recommend adding darker lines there.
Second, the fire is well drawn, however some lighting doesn't work well with the character. The character has fur and the lightning you used would be more appropriate on someone with a metal of skin instead of fur.
Here's a tutorial on line thickness by Cubesona
www.deviantart.com/cubesona/ar…
And a Fur shading tutorial by clockbirds
www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpY5WW…
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