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Published: 2008-03-12 21:14:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 6922; Favourites: 245; Downloads: 299
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oi oi savalois!!my good friend and dear sir knight of the drawing realm asked me to draw a fan art of Seiglinde from a cartoon (i dont know which one).
something looks annoyingly flat about it, i think it might be the outlines, being the same width almost everywhere it kinds flattens everything out. need to get my outline variety going on
but let me know what you guys think anyway
Safe!
xxx
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ya-!
it's great to finally see some new work from you! ;D
and even better, you honour me with your artwork X3
waii!, she looks very cool and - splendid too ^^
to say it with your words: safe!
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safe lol, well do let me know if you want anything changed. like, she looks more adult than kid because her eyes arnt big enough... i can always try and change that if you want.
And Esushi pointed out that one of her boobs should be raised a bit, and he's right, so i might try and have a jingle with that and see if it looks any better
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Nicely done.
Good colours and lines.
Only crit I can offer is the left boob should be a bit higher as her shoulder is raised.
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oooooooooooooooooooh how could i have missed that!! you are very correct in your observations!!
i really should change it, but i dunno how to do it without having to change loads and loads of other bits
any suggestions?
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It would be very tricky to change at this point... maybe dropping the shoulder might be the easiest path.
I think it might be a case of "Live and learn". Just remember for next time
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