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Published: 2002-02-28 12:32:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 460; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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Description This is something I'm gonna enter in a competition, so any advise on how to improve it is welcome
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Comments: 17

blackeagle [2002-03-15 15:20:06 +0000 UTC]

haha, they don't do that for me, but I have already worked on it, btw I have an updated version in my gallery

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watchitman [2002-03-15 05:36:50 +0000 UTC]

The figure in the center looks really nice but the rest looks unfinished. The cloth doesn't drape right either. You should have a friend stand in a robe or sheet or something as a reference.
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blackeagle [2002-03-01 06:37:43 +0000 UTC]

and it also screws up the symetry of the picture, hehe

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blackeagle [2002-03-01 06:33:48 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I'm gonna make the robe wave around since HE is emanating the power evenly to every direction and this gives him an invincible look

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mickjim [2002-03-01 04:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Great work.

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paxtin [2002-03-01 03:52:13 +0000 UTC]

this is a cool drawing, it looks like art work from DeablO 2.

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olya [2002-03-01 01:33:14 +0000 UTC]

i can't really offer any help besides saying how awesome this is.
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notsogr [2002-02-28 17:32:27 +0000 UTC]

yea, the robe needs some livelyness in it. all the rocks flying around, the cracks in the rock - all suggest that there is something really energetic going on there, the robe should also wave around.
and those long cracks on the left ... they just don't look right.
but i like the wings (nice work there) and the armor-thingi on the robe. very nice.

so, keep improving this drawing, what we have here is a good start

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redred [2002-02-28 14:17:57 +0000 UTC]

very good sketch! I like the wings the most.
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lemut [2002-02-28 13:38:32 +0000 UTC]

bigger!! bigger!!!... the lines showing the direction of the rocks sucks. and put more life to the clothes.

is a really nice sketch so, improve it! please tell me when update this.
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rastamon [2002-02-28 13:05:29 +0000 UTC]

really nice drawing. I can't really see how improve it , except for what
jixxy has already said.


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korfyum [2002-02-28 12:52:08 +0000 UTC]

incredibly beautifull

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blackeagle [2002-02-28 12:50:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll do that

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jixxy [2002-02-28 12:49:03 +0000 UTC]

You might wantto consider some more realism to the clothing, ie. not so striaght, give it some depth for the bottom of the robe or something. Otherwsie real nice work.

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blackeagle [2002-02-28 12:40:55 +0000 UTC]

thnx!

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mimle [2002-02-28 12:39:43 +0000 UTC]

i have no idea how to improve this, cos it is amazing!
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blackeagle [2002-02-28 12:33:14 +0000 UTC]

I'll put a bigger version online when it's finished

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