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Published: 2004-10-06 04:55:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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bloody oozing hell,the tie that binds,
me to you.
cold iron fetters,
that strangle,
then sever,
cede my bowels
into knots.
rusty blades,
your words,
cleaving through my air supply.
ripping my flesh
destroying my waining spirit.
you are barbed wire,
ensnaring my freedom.
I will purchase,
with pitted scars,
a new reality.
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Project-Darkhaven [2004-10-29 01:00:43 +0000 UTC]
Well, I can say that I like it, but as to any real critique. I cannot give one, for poetry isnβt my forte. I will point out that it stirred my emotions, if that helps.
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