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Published: 2002-10-29 03:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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hey look BF has a gun! (Like always..) ^_^you better not be the one thats staring into the hole of his gun thingy which was a very hard angle to draw it at... -_-;
im not gonna get better if i don't get feedback, so whats wrong with this and how can i do better?
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Comments: 4
blue-elem3nt [2002-10-29 18:42:47 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty good, I only see a few problems with it. First, his hand looks really odd, I couldn't see his thumb until I zoomed in. It made his hand look backwards or something, just making the thumb a little more noticeable would fix that though. The legs do look a little odd, like trip said, but you could fix that by making the legs meet in more of a curve than a point (the same goes for fingers if you happen to do be drawing them like that, just make a peace sign with your fingers and you can see what I mean about a curve instead of a point.) Hehehe! Look at me ramble! Sorry about that.
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triptychr [2002-10-29 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]
In my opinion, this is a real good piece overall. The only things I notice that could be improved are the eyes (they could use a little more detail, and what the heck is he looking at?) and the fact that he doesn't seem to have, um... a crotch. Maybe if you just set the tops of the legs farther apart, that could help.
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cozmictwinkie [2002-10-29 03:39:58 +0000 UTC]
The angle looks good! I can't draw guns worth crap! very cool
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