jsenn [2001-05-26 04:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Enigmatic struggles, a tear, ripples, the worn path of life. There is a bittersweet taste in this poem, and I think each reader may sense it, relate to it differently. It is exceptional.

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ramdom [2001-05-25 21:22:22 +0000 UTC]

- wonderful, pleasant, thought-provoking prose.
great stuff and way to go for Daily Poem! [somehow, i thought of the band : the Teardrop Explodes...?] {and or an?}

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euphoria [2001-05-25 19:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Thanks for sharing a bit of yourself.

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cooper [2001-05-25 15:43:18 +0000 UTC]

congrats on the daily poem, it was a nice little poem.

@coop@

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jackdirt [2001-05-25 14:20:55 +0000 UTC]

very nice although I am not sure that the language is all the complex :\ that kinda scares me i thoguth people had larger vocabularies but I was wrong anyway good job. Also know thta i never look at poems let alone comment so consider yourself grade a worthy
Jack Dirt
Keen B***h Keen!
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A.R.S. Coming Soon!!!

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kimiko [2001-05-25 08:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Although it's short, it manages to fit a lot in. A very inspiring poem, and I hope to see more of your work. I like it! ^^

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nailz [2001-05-25 06:24:36 +0000 UTC]

your work is wierd, you use very complex language, in a very short amount of lines. Im really liking it, congrats on DP

Dont be anyones slogan, you are your own poetry

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isonica [2001-05-25 06:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Good work Boz, its good to see some of your older poems are being recognised.

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kabookie123 [2001-01-02 18:58:44 +0000 UTC]

pretty good? I would have to say very good. excellent work keep it up!
I will be waiting for more
--kabookie

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eclipze [2001-01-02 15:04:47 +0000 UTC]

I know how fond I am of comments myself so I thought I'd just leave a bit of my mind... This is very nice and though still short. You're pretty good.

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