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Published: 2010-12-12 21:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 5
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Welcome to a tripInto my hurt feelings
To the center of my soul
You better bring a light
To find the house of meanings
In the labyrinth of yes or no
For you, life is just like chess
If you don't make a move
You'll lose the game like this
Cause you, you're walking on the edge
You, you chose the way of love and pain
You, don't you see the bridge
I've built for you, it's just one step to start again
Welcome to a trip
Into my emotions
To the language of my heart
You're sailing on a river
That becomes an ocean
Which you can only cross with love
For you, life is just like chess
If you don't make a move
You'll lose the game like this
Cause you, you're walking on the edge
You, you chose the way of love and pain
You, don't you see the bridge
I've built for you, it's just one step to start again...
walking on the edge_Scorpions
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Comments: 5
TeddyLoveVenom [2010-12-16 00:38:11 +0000 UTC]
I agree with neid. Her head is a little to small. I understand her head is tilted downward, but it needs to be slightly larger. Also you are missing the pinky fingers on her hands. Unless she's not entirely human or a humanoid of some sort, she needs those pinkys unless they were gone at birth or something.
When I can, I'll get my tablet out and give you an idea of what I mean on the head part, so there's no misunderstanding. C: Overall, I'm just suggesting. <3
It's a well drawn piece and I love the colored pencil shading you used. Keep up the great work!
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junfender [2010-12-12 22:10:17 +0000 UTC]
Naa..non รจ cosi' piccola la testa, non รจ vero, non tanto da ritoccare il disegno con un programma, caso mai piu' attenzione la prossima volta
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niedlichemaus [2010-12-12 21:17:53 +0000 UTC]
this whole picture is great except that her head is too small i think you should go into a program like sai and edit it a bit to make it larger, and more in proportion. it's actually really easy to do!! otherwise i love the coloring, and her jeans are cool :]
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