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brokenaoshi — Longing

Published: 2008-02-25 03:25:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1812; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 53
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Description This is my first "story" flash.

I did it with a mouse, and drew every frame. So it has taken me a few months to complete.

Originally it had no text, but then I remembered people couldn't read my mind. My mind doesn't speak english well, so please make assumptions.

Originally, a happy ending was planned. Plans change with people I guess.

This is for someone very special to me.
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Comments: 95

Gamerpanda [2008-02-26 20:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Great job. I was going to say that it should have more color, but I think it's cool statement with only the hearts being in color.

>__> I wanna learn to make flash movies now.

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brokenaoshi In reply to Gamerpanda [2008-02-26 22:32:56 +0000 UTC]

It's fun :C

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Sabeku [2008-02-25 23:06:06 +0000 UTC]

wow... although this isn't a "wonderful" or super awesome flash, theres something about it that is really striking... the emotion and time put into this.. and you used a mouse!! thats amazing! I really like this, and also, what was the song used?
keep up the good work! ^^

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brokenaoshi In reply to Sabeku [2008-02-26 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]

* bow * I'm glad you could feel it ^-^

The song is called Longing and was written by ~thewhantahndestroyer

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thewhantahndestroyer In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 22:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Good Job Koibito... I love you.

Do you like my song in excesse?

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brokenaoshi In reply to thewhantahndestroyer [2008-02-26 01:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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kgiax In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 21:15:21 +0000 UTC]

o_o...

I envy you...

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-02-26 01:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Lol >.>

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-02-28 21:41:37 +0000 UTC]

No no I'm so so serious.

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-02-29 15:35:53 +0000 UTC]

But I'm not that good xD

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-03 17:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Even if that's true, you're good enough at it for me to envy it.

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-03 18:45:36 +0000 UTC]

lol :F I'll get better.

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-04 03:36:36 +0000 UTC]

To make me more envious?

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-04 15:04:33 +0000 UTC]

;-; No. To accomplish my own standards.

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-04 19:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well, then I call your standards into question!

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-04 21:29:48 +0000 UTC]

O_O QUESTION?!

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-04 22:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Uh huh, into question.

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-05 18:09:49 +0000 UTC]

My standards aren't that high >_> I just want to be able to not be ashamed of what I do.

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-06 04:23:55 +0000 UTC]

There's nothing wrong with that, but that doesn't discredit your current work. o.o

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-06 19:16:29 +0000 UTC]

DOES TOO >:C RAAAAWR

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-06 22:03:34 +0000 UTC]

NU UH BOOTY FACE

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-07 15:02:59 +0000 UTC]

;___; * runs away crying *

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kgiax In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-03-07 23:55:51 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO ITS ACTUALLY AN ATTRACTIVE QUALITY SOMEHOW p_p!

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-03-11 13:38:13 +0000 UTC]

xD * pat *

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Nanashi-Hikage In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 17:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thats awesome. The drawings are so cute ^w^ *gives you many coookies*

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brokenaoshi In reply to Nanashi-Hikage [2008-02-26 01:57:34 +0000 UTC]

Kyaaaa so many cookies!!

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Sabinu In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 09:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww, its really cool! <3 The girl is soo cute <3

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brokenaoshi In reply to Sabinu [2008-02-25 14:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! ^_^

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PyroNyuko In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 06:39:01 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome... I am really impressed. You've come so far, really. Be proud of it.

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brokenaoshi In reply to PyroNyuko [2008-02-25 07:12:16 +0000 UTC]

^-^! Thank you. I'm just glad I finally finished this... haha.

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spinnytwirl In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 06:10:29 +0000 UTC]

this was really good O.o
even though some of it didnt make sense to me, there was still something emotionally pulling towards it =]

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brokenaoshi In reply to spinnytwirl [2008-02-25 07:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about that ^ ^;; I really have a long way to go before I am a formidable flash user.

I'm glad you still liked it :3

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spinnytwirl In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-02-25 07:25:26 +0000 UTC]

its okay
i think you did very well for your first story flash!

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Amb0rg [2008-02-25 06:04:14 +0000 UTC]

That is really pretty good. :>

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brokenaoshi In reply to Amb0rg [2008-02-25 07:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^///^

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TAHOpaints [2008-02-25 05:37:27 +0000 UTC]

This really struck a chord in me. I can relate to this.

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dolor-sit-amet In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 05:23:06 +0000 UTC]

I really really like this, but I missed about half of it because there was no splash screen, and it started before I was ready.

On the second loop I saw it all, though, and it was wonderful.

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brokenaoshi In reply to dolor-sit-amet [2008-02-25 07:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry... ._. I can't make load screens.

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Tlaxus In reply to ??? [2008-02-25 03:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Not bad. Drawing frame by frame is hard.......DX.
Well done though!

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brokenaoshi In reply to Tlaxus [2008-02-25 04:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ;-;

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Tlaxus In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-02-25 04:10:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SplatKiriki [2008-02-25 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Epic win.

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brokenaoshi In reply to SplatKiriki [2008-02-25 03:58:04 +0000 UTC]

* blush * Thankyu ;-;

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SplatKiriki In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-02-25 10:55:04 +0000 UTC]

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